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It is a really fresh and new concept It is simular to I am a Mighty Lion only a lot faster and better, I really enjoyed reading it ?????
the initial progression of the story is great but now its just bad. ............................................... really bad and boring, i can understand why people at the start are so hyped and as the story progress they just don't bother anymore .. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i just read raws and it was interesting, raws were up to chapter 51 so this novel is new but very interesting. everyone has their preferences and I like this one alot. i play monopoly with friends so it is fun to read it. monopoly is overpowered in this novel nonetheless good to read it! Waiting till it comes up and read it!
Im giving this 5* just because I saw the words "A record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality". I cant wait to see this out if trial reads and into the sea of books Im reading daily ??
The quality of the writing is well done. You get what it means most of the time. The Stability of the chapters is what seems like at least one chapter week, it depends on the author's mood I presume, or his workplace. The Story Development is good and there is folklore within it. It is interesting to see some lore, you know? The Character Design I would say is the best thing so far. The reason why that is is that it gives you good and exact details on the character or his/her face. You can actually imagine her/his facial expressions! Moving on to World Background. It is pretty good, it ain't bad, nor good, its a-ok. It doesn't give TO much info nor to vague, just perfect, like the movies in a sense.
great story great mc great battles not so great writing quality with lots of wrong words ana gramma but it dose not affect how good the story and fights are
Most deserving 5 ? to date!Excelent pacing with well thought-out characters in some unexpectedly hilarious situations.P.S. Try not grin like a naive innocent at least once a chapter. I dare ya!
There is some grammatical mistakes but nothing that it is too evident and annoys the reader. I like it how the author seems to be improving his style as the chapters go on. If you stop at the beginning because it has some mistakes or author inexperience, you gonna regret because the novel becomes great after the chapter 20.
Plot of the stories great.Specially the part when is describ inner thought of the goddess. I have to say it was a unique part.'man it was creepy~I still have a goosebumps'
I like the story... It was interesting to the point that I'm looking forward to it... I was wondering who will be the man who will catch her attention and will find her interesting....
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It's not worth dying for a man like Carlos .. This is captivating ... Great book author
