The start of this novel is very good, especially a first meeting of main characters. It was funny... Male lead is very intriguing and secretive. Can't wait to see a future development of the story.
nice story development but cliche trope i must say ?u200d?
I love this novel I started it a little skeptical cause it's a chaos 40k fanfiction so I thought it was gonna be like a novel some W40k fanfic authors write but it is surprisingly good the writing is really good the character is great and the interactions with the other gods are awesome I love the way your doing the world traveling it's there but it's not a main thing yet cause slanesh is not born yet I can't wait for that I know you said that they are gonna bring hashutt to their side but I wonder is slanesh gonna be larhal's enemy cause of her divinitys or is one of the other chaos gods from fantasy gonna be his enemy i personally would love to see larhal treat slanesh as the little sister he spoils cause they just about share divinitys that would be cool please do that
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this is the most realistic Wuxian novel I read here, even though I don't like that genre, this novel is difference, and it executes very well done and also have good explanation
WOahhhhh I really like the premise of this novel and the world building so far. I look forward to learning about the main character and how he will grow. The main character seems deeper than a simple cut out of an isekai character, and I like that a lot.
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I just absolutely LOVED the first three chapters, the amount of sassiness that I felt from only reading three chapters!?!?!? It’s just ughhhh Art I need more of you author keep up the good work ?☺️???. —ps consider I loveeeeeeeeeeee your work?
So interesting and tantalizing. I can't keep on turning the pages and see what happens next.........Surely I will recommend it to others to see it themselves and be amazed just like me.
IT is a very interesting start, The way the main character first gets his game system is interesting and I'm happy for once, that the girl isn't a complete scumbag like in most stories. The grammar is strange in places, but you can tell this is from someone who's English is their second language and it's great and still readable and enjoyable.
Definitely an adventure based story! Well written and easy to follow. Has decent character development thus far and an engaging plot that keeps you guessing what will happen next and pulls you in to keep reading. I can't wait to see where their adventure takes them!
This is best described as a quiky. 5 chapters in op gamer with support of rich company and easily solves problems.... decent read but don’t expect much in way of actual story.