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Very cool, I only don't like a few things, like you use authors notes a bit to much, the power system was explained in 1 chapter instead of throughout the story, but other than that it's good, I highly recommend.
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the best webnovel i've read, mc without hero complex, mc ain't no simp, mc only cares about his development, good world building, he ain't evil nor good he just cares about his self, was refreshing to read, hope this translator comes back soon :) (dear translator pls give more chapter or i will break in ur house)
I say this as the author. Of all the stories rolling around in my head, this is by far my favorite tale. I've had this on the back burner for years, but wouldn't let myself write it until I was fully confident in my abilities as an author. Now, after I've already published 1.5 million words under other premium stories, I'm ready. Now, I can do this story justice. So, of course, I'm giving it 5 stars! I'd give it 10 if I was able :]
Is it done with 357 chapters? Need to read new ones...........................................................................................................................................
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It's a good story and i really enjoy reading it. Although sometimes i feel the story is too safe, no hard conflict at all...maybe the author just wants to highlight the love story between FL and ML
truthfully your book has got me hooked. it told with a very relaxing style of narractive. Opal is a very nice character, and from what I have seen presently, a simple one (as of now). can't wait to see her growth as a character.
though I want to know if she gets a love interest. but a nice book. kudos author
i like your story and will continue to await all updates and i want to ask if you have any of novels like this one that you would recommend to me
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Story after 83 chapters no spoilers - female MC and her army of c*ckolds somehow remain ignorant that she's c*cking them. The moment male MC says the sky is blue, female MC disagrees and is offended and with male MC, then somehow all the 50 c*ckolds in a 1000 miles know that male MC offended for female MC and plan ambushes for male cannon fodder MC. (eye roll) The story is definitely infuriating no to mention the NTR by female MC, and some subtle undertones of NTR for male MC. MC not interested in romance starts it anyway, MC never sharing any taughts on other characters with other characters is also a big turn off, always saying the bare minimum, dude could just release some truths or smthing and release some strongly worded justice, but yet we remain dissapointed by MCs passiveness. All around infuriating.Then the reading - im not sure if translation, chat GTP or the author, but the sentences are a mess, constant jumps between points. In good noves u know when the info dump starts and can skip it - here its a dumpster fire, u skim over a word and the next paragraph no longer makes sense. Making the story is rly awkward to read, reading it feels like something is constantly off, a big mess.
A complete 10/10.The grammar is good and the plot is interesting. The thought of the crowd believing that she wanted to coming suicide while she just wanted to get some fresh is crazy and humorous. The overall story is amazing and perfectly structured. I can't wait for your next update and keep up the great work :)