Very good
Since it matters to some. Harem is currently not planned. I'll edit if this changes. Hopefully, it doesn't. The mc has an interesting power that lets him issue commands to himself, to others, and even non-living things. However, he chooses not to abuse this. He has a system, but it doesn't force him to do anything and gives him multiple paths on how he can interact with an event at all. The story takes place a few cycles in which means the mc has the classic my mental age is older than my body, so older women only please. As of 52 ch in there has yet to be romance and it doesn't seem likely in the near future. I am enjoying the series though it is a bit slice of life atm that is looking to change.
Final score
Worth the read.
I like the premise, despite having an extremely slow pace and short chapters, I read it with curiosity and without any problem, but my reason for abandoning the novel is the extremely irritating female character of Seo Hea-Jung, I found her personality very annoying.
This is my opinion, if you want to read the novel do it.
PS: English is not my main language :p
So I finished all of your current chapters. So far, you've correctly estsblished the importance of the game, it's relation to the character, the character's goals and risks. Family interactions and everything seemed fine , so the initial premise set up is all well.
Now the issues. Right now it's far too early to determine any plot issues that might stick out. I can't see any problems, aside from some areas with awkward wording, such as "the son of Ren's neighborhood" when introducing Roni. I'd recommend going back and perhaps polishing these areas, but those are fairly minor as it doesn't distract from the pace or the plot. There's also some minor grammar errors just as incorrect tense usage, "Ren never even met Silvia in his entire existence..." and so on.
Next would be since you're writing in third person, you really need to describe the MC. early on for readers to build a easier connections. We don't really get an idea of Ren until chapter 5 during his character creation screen, and although it is good that you did so, I personally prefer it to be done early on, especially since you even have Roni, a character that readers are supposed to hate, defined before the MC. I found this to be rather awkward personally.
Other than those I can't think of anything else at the moment. I hope your next chapter fleshes out Covenant well though. Be sure to make the world gripping and interesting to explore and follow.
OH YES F*CKING PLEASE THIS SOUNDS SO F*CKING AWESOME
Really, we need more light hearted novels, and this one sounds just perfect, sincerely hope it won't be disappointing
I feel sorry for those who likes antagonists and villains but still find this novel interesting! I can only say you haven't read the real novel that's why. I've made reading list for villain novels you can check it out.(only read those which has my reviews since I just added them but haven't read all)
Read few chapters writing quality is good worth looking into I would also like to know If you other tags or are you planning on adding other tags?
I am enjoying to read more. Alex is sweet and smart to not friend with his bullies who talked about Alex, "poorest loser". I didn't like his bullies but I love to see they will open their mouth on a ground when they will see Alex is a millionaire now.
where ca i find more novels where mc has simillar powers
man of culture here
Story is great and very interesting, BUT translation quality is a ****ing joke right now. It would be bad if it wasn't premium, BUT IT IS and more of it translator put raw text in it for SS. 10-15 SS for chapter, are you ****ing serious? Can anyone do something about it? I'm ain't paying for this bullcrap no more.
wouldve been great if this wasnt an mtl. it felt like reading a braindead texts. what a waste of translation