It's been a great story so far and am sure it will pique anyone's interest.. Am a fan of football so when I saw the novel was about football I rushed. Good work Author.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
New here and this is this is recommended by a friend. Currently sitting by the window in a rainy weather with a laptop and reading this while taking hot tea just makes my day refreshing. Thanks for the chapters and do not change development style suddenly
My biggest three issues in the novel can all be solved with some editing, I mean I swear it was over a hundred chapters before suite was spelled as suite instead of suit. He'd go to his suit, shower and change into his suit, before leaving his suit headed to someone else's suit. Besides editing stuff though, I really like the story and binged all 249 chapters. Also, not what I was expecting when I read the synopsis.
the story is very poetic! you have a good vocabularies! keep up the good work!
I have finally caught up to the recent chapter available that isn't privileged (814), and I have to say I'm pretty hooked and excited about what will happen next. The pacing is fairly even despite it being 800 chapters. The author is obviously taking their time with the story, and the lore and world-building are slowly coming together nicely. I can't help but wait for the next release of the chapter!Our cast of characters has also grown exponentially! I really love how they handled the development of each one of them throughout the story despite it already being an extremely long journey. Big ups to the author.Other than that, I can't wait to see more! I love this story. It's made me love fantasy and levelling systems even more. It shows that there is more that we can do with the genre when handled correctly with its pacing, world-building, character development, and power scaling. It's honestly inspiring, and I hope for more to come in the future. Thank you for making an amazing story yet again!!!
Great Novel btw I hope you continue translate it. If not I want to know the original chinese tittle for this novel? I think its worth it to read it raw translated with google translate
Ничего не понятно, нудно и скучно. Мир сложный, и его не раскрывают. Персонаж глупый. Второстепенные персонажи бесят...Положительных моментов я тут вообще толком не разглядел, за что и низкая оценка.
The story is really great. It actually take the basics of fantasy novel but I like it how u manage to do something good with it.It's a little bit slow at the beginning but it slowly and surely go to the right direction.I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Hello there! Author' here. Testing my new story. Hope you all like it. Furthermore, the cover was not mine. Thanks for spending your precious times. Feel free to stopping by. Oh by the way, english is my second language...sorry for the mistakes?
It’s really really really really goodJust keep going in this paceAnd I’ll vote 2 stone forever until you finish the storyReally really good
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