Phoebus_Aphos
What happened to this novel. Why is no one translating this?
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First!I've read the first three chapters in a hurry, and they basically shove a good amount of info straight up that I just skipped them. There was no emotional investment on my part either as the MC was abruptly introduced out of nowhere. There was no life whatsoever, everything is technical as though the one narrating was an AI.
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Hey,this is liaison, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book for the fist chapter,but i can't waite to contact you.and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. Feel free to keep in touch with me at twitter:@SLiasison or [email protected]. i am looking forward to your message.
Actually, I don't want to write a review this early but I found this novel quite gems. The MC really cautions in his every action which makes him more smarter than other novels that related to the modern setup.Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
I think the discrimination of the story should also add “crazy fanatic with following his delusions of be good and serving for god “ the way the mc justify his doings”killings” is just halfassed ,and the flow of the story is not grate we dont have a clear presence of the mc thinking process in the start his family background ,world state and world around him which is not constituent.over all i it 3.8/5 points but the story has so much potential maybe the story could be re edited by professional the it could be one of the top stories with great fame and could be one of those where i would want to wait for its update everyday eagerly.
The Auther be licking his lips thinking of ways to Kill the MC’s firends for his character development ?????????????????????????
