Good novel
So far the story is great would be perfect if the author describes everything a bit more such as mc, setting/background/new significant place such as when the mc got to the sect author never really described the mc's first impression and the surroundings. Maybe the author will do it in future chapter but it's always better to described as the character moves on his journey, well at least what he is felling and what he sees in his surroundings. Also, try to describe the characters appearance a bit more. This seems to be a major issue in the original novel section, hopefully the author improves on this. One more thing that's killing me is please use capital letter for first letter of the sentence and names. Overall the story is great but needs more details, you want the readers to feel or try to feel what the character is experiencing and picture everything.
This type of novel is hypocritical so losing brain cells is highly conducive
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Is this novel competing in WSA 2024? Please reply.
The story started great and is pretty funny. However, by now it's starting to get boring.
MC needs some challenges and we need a proper story development. Instead we have:
1. MC that can knock out anyone despite their cultivation.
2. MC having no goals and doing random stuff just because he can.
3. Very brief characters.
4. Unknown world background.
I'm aware this is meant to be a parody. But I'd prefer a parody with a good plot too.
Another novel that past the paywall not only becomes worse, it's straight up unreadable
hidden gemi bought an membership just to support this book, surely in my top 5 novels
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At Chapter 617 now.
The story is extremely fast pace. Best part is MC starts off at almost the top cultivation level but he is poor.
While most authors will create a smart MC that are aware of the other MCs and they will purposely be smarter and have all the lucky items, this MC is different.
This MC is just being himself and he is weaker than everyone becos he is a sword cultivator.
But that the fun part, he even screws himself by lying often, likes to show off, he hates to be green but he is really a likeable and funny MCs that the heroines really like him and poke fun at him.
Sounds interesting but I'd really like to know a few things first like "Is it a harem?" or "Is it completed?", "Is the main character a pervert?" (The preferred answers are No-Yes-No). This is why tags would be useful.
bit too early to determine how things go, but looks good for now. other people also have ridiculous talents, doesn't appear to just be a one sided curbstomp. you get the idea. in short it doesn't really show off any flaws at this time.