I enjoy the book immensely but I need more!
well done you have a nice story line with the results
Hey all my reviews deleted. so sob sob. I need to review but dont read many book. i review again same book ok? thank you. peace. Great Book. Nice sci-fi. nice Magic. Fun-filled adventure. I have a fantastic read. Cant stop reading this book. Way to go. Please don't stop writing
fun read. I want more. needs some editing for spelling.
It has an interesting premise but shallow characters, hurried scenes and a really subpar writing.Had to drop it for now, might pick it up again in the future if it gets edited and maybe a bit revised.
HahahahaThis story is sick, everything feels so real and lifelike and…. To be frank sans endless praises for this divine piece i have nothing else to say (except the fact that i personally prefer 3rd person to 1st person????? people’s choice)This is a great book, a wonderful masterpiece
it's some what close to the story on anime but like the twist its always have. lest see how far nara goes and how powerful he can become. if you like anime you will like this story
This is a good story, I really like the writing. At first I thought maybe it wasn't really for me, but it kept me hooked up after a few chapters ! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter !
Review as at chapter 20It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out. But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.
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Magnificent cover page! The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive. You are doing great!Another story to follow... I wish I could have more power stones ;)