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I nicely written novel with the MC being aware of the tropes a typical xinxia has. It has a lot of potential to be developed.
I really hope that it doesn’t get forgotten or dropped
The story developments is very interesting and keeps the reader intrigued and interested. In addition, the stability of updates is excellent. The writing quality is also good but the author needs to make it longer so the reader doesn't get too impatient.
Very difficult to write because of all the research efforts that would go into it. I really commend your effort. Great work. I believe I have taken a lot from your work that I can use on a new work I'm already planning. Don't worry, I won't take too much
The story has very nice kingdom building plots. Just the grammar makes it kind of unreadable. Still, I rate this novel 5 star cause i am used to machine translations and bad grammar cant do anything to me (*Evil Laughter*). Thank you very much author for this wonderful novel.
Just your Typical Transmigrator MC to the past in modern world with lot of xianxia bullsh*t and flirting cr*p, cliche story, everything is beautiful female leadBut hey, Atleast I read until 60 Chapter, Just Worship this lord will do!
Story is well written with few fillers, but its weakness is MC who is hypocrite , guillable , patsy and tbh dumb. He saves random youths even without knowing if he would be able to kill those beasts( he has been mistreated his whole life and bullied so his feelings in a dog eat dog world make no sense), ends up trusting a family enough to show his eyes , even after being warned by someone few minutes ago , which he known for no more than for few minutes . He knows he is an extra but still thinks them of as family, naively tells his discovery to his teacher which he should not and tries some experiment on his second soul bond while he could have waited to find one with better potential.... Taking undue risk. At the end , someone like him wouldn't survive in real world, and his actions scream plot armourAuthor says it again and again that he is mature but in reality he is emotional mess without much rationality to back his actions. Read but don't waste your spirit stones or pass on it as his character growth stops at chapter 10.
The Title itself seems so interesting.. I am a new reader and just started reading it but this seems to be so interesting that I am literally hooked to this book.. Would love to get more and more such chapters.. Hope you get many more successful chapters and definitely new novels.. Have a great year ahead..
The story will be thrilling in the fifth or sixth chapter. Only you can trust me , Well, I can say the story is actually going to be ( Love Contract) in Chapter Eleven. Understanding love will be very difficult. just wait
Here I am, waiting for the next release, and writing this review in the meantime. I’ve decided to be succinct, so here it goes.In terms of writing quality, it is not bad. Mediocre or even slightly above average. Compared to other novels I read on this site, prior to the creation of my account, it fares quite well, but not so well that it stands out. There are sentence structuring errors here and there and incorrect spellings for certain words/terms which slightly draws away from the experience. Not by much, but for a neophyte grammar critique, such as myself, the effects are significant.In terms of consistency in updating, I can’t really comment much since I have been binge-reading up until this point, but over the past few days, I don’t think there have been any changes, although you are free to correct me if I am wrong. I have also not found any indication of the author’s update schedule or anything similar to estimate how many updates they are planning to make per week, which is fine, since some authors don’t operate on a strict schedule, but for me, I don’t find it particularly reassuring to not know how many chapters I should expect.The story development and characters are by far the key elements here. They outshine the majority of the decent novels I’ve read in the past few months, even encouraging me to create this account for the sole purpose of reading it.Both the plot and characters are unique and intriguing, the latter even more so. The experimentation of the dual-protagonist system is, in my eyes, a significant success on quite a few levels. The inter-personal dynamics were also highly well done. Especially in regards to the key characters and the main duo themselves. Their decisions throughout the story are logical and more or less realistic, or at least in relation to a majority of other novels (I won’t mention any names) that allow their characters to go on multiple nonsensical jumps in logic to arrive at a certain outcome. Some might argue that there are too many time-skips in the beginning chapters and I will have to say that I partially agree. While I find it reasonable to skip over their infancy, the segment regarding the separation from the protagonists’ home town, for example, was done way too abruptly and glossed over in a few sentences. The separation felt far too abrupt, even for me, considering the presence of Rean and his ‘filial’ sentiments.That connects to the topic of the narrative’s world building. I can’t say the world building is average, per se, but it certainly isn’t top-grade, in my opinion. Of course, it is still leaps and bounds ahead of most other cultivation-type novels, but I feel that even taking into account the ignorance of the twins and their non-existent information network, the world seems a pinch too shallow in my eyes.Also, I feel the need to applaud the author for not developing any form of romance. Thank you for that. Really, I mean it. Though, as soon as any semblance of romance shows it’s disgusting face, I will be forced to drop this series, unfortunately. I am sick and tired of romance. It’s like a drug. You get a fleeting high when you start to use it, but then with continued exposure to it, not only do you become immune to it, it starts to become a poison for your mind and body. At least, that’s what I have found out.Overall, it is a great novel, but for whatever reason, it seems to be overshadowed by the authors more prominent work ‘Is that a Wisp?’, which I have not yet read, unfortunately. The pacing is great, and the balance between high-tension scenes and more casual scenes are very well done. The author has managed to find success where many promising others have found naught but failure.In any case, I do hope for updates sooner rather than later. Those two are very interesting to observe.
Although the theme itself is quite generic and getting overused from what I've read so far it's honestly pretty interesting and refreshing.MC for once isn't hiding his talents and although some of the parts that I've read are a bit cringe overall I was pretty satisfied from what I read. if the author maintains this level this could definitely be a great novel!Definitely pick this web novel!
Ok,this is good ****.The Story is not rush,the MC is not Brain dead or Dumbass,the development is exciting✨??✨??✨??????????????✨?????✨✨✨???✨✨✨✨✨?✨✨✨