This feels like someone translated a chineese book, and swapped all names and places into american. If this book was a person, it would be a chineese tourist in america, carrying an american/chineese dictionary and wearing an I <3 NY t-shirt.
first 4 chapters are fine but 5th chapter has things that I am not a fan of ... like putting religious promotions in the story . I came to read a novel not a religious doctrine , don't want to sink into that swamp . will come back to read more later. maybe its not as bad as I think it is....
alright I'm gonna leave an actual review with some cons and pros
cons: sometimes it gets a bit boring but it's pretty well rounded. no harem. it's pretty hard to imagine some of the stuff.
pros: not some weird world domination thing it's similar to I am a prodigy by rugao under the bridge. no harem. Battle rabbit and pigeon.
Honestly, it's kinda ass. Just a run of the mill, MC fucks everything and everyone noteworthy and they all love him unconditionally. The plot is all laid out in front of you and is completely linear, everything happens right after the previous event, there is no returning to clean up or previous mentions of anything that happened before its just "this happens, and then that happens, and we're done".
The characters don't develop in anyway, shape or form. The only "development" is that they get stronger and that's about it.
Honestly not worth the read.
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Eu achei a sinopse interessante . E tbm já li o outro livro dele , que por sinal é muito bom. Vou gostar desse tbm. Boa sorte autor ....................
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Great work bro.I'm so proud of you(you know why). Although, you have to improve your grammar skills, the concept is quite clear. Interesting so far. Good luck.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The most interesting fact is that you have taken the present world pandemic as a backdrop and woven a plot around your story. Not an innovation, but all the persons associated with the medical profession etc have made such a background for their story.
I just read your first chapter and it is quite long perhaps equivalent to an ordinary book which would cover this material in 4-5 chapters.
As far as the writing quality goes, I do not see any fault except for the long chapters and long paragraphs. Your command over the English language is good. However, if you want all persons to read your book, please use less bombastic words. Simple English will go a long way to get you readers from across the globe.
Stability of updates is there. The story is developing nicely. The character design is good. World background is excellent.
I am looking forward to continue reading your book. and it will remain in my library.
All the best,Author!
It's has hooked me from the first chapter hope the author eill continue to wrote this story but i think its abandoned :(
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Author, I've already read all the chapters, I'm just curious if the MC will have children in the future and will they be just as strong as him?