You would think this is a story about what's started happening now that the 800 years are over, but no. This is a story about all 800 years of cultivating. Staring the MC sitting around and doing NOTHING for 800 years. Also staring a bunch of random people wandering near the MC and getting struck by lightning, lol.
No big spoilers since I've only went to chapter 40 but if its that big of a deal don't read this. There is also a TL;DR with no spoilers at the bottom so you don't have to read everything I wrote.
Small Summary: MC wants to make a tribe after the tribe he was in was destroyed and with the help of his sister and friends he makes a base for his new tribe to be settled but since there is only 5 people they will need to lure in new people to join. MC is from earth and uses his knowledge to make his little tribe prosper. MC also found this cool super big vine so he makes his tribe close to it and make his tribe the "Vine tribe". This small summary turned out to be bigger than expected...
Translation Quality: Its not bad and was always readable. There were a few mistakes regarding his/her a few times but other than that the TQ was very high if I could I would give it 4.7/5 instead of just 4/5.
Stability of Updates: I got here when there was already 40 chapters so I don't know much but since I have to pick I might as well pick higher.
Story Development: I have no idea why MC wants to make a tribe but dreams don't need to have reasons so I won't say much but I really liked how the actions taken were seemingly reasonable and not over the type like MC somehow knowing how to make electricity for no reason. Nothing of that nature where MC somehow knows everything for every occasion but more like MC can only use the little info he has from earth which already exceeds the Primitive forest.
Character Design: I felt like the other characters were ignored when it came to personalities especially the first 3 the brother and sister meet. Although they each have their own little interactions you really don't know much about them except their names, their roles within the tribe and how they always respect MC. The vagabonds they later find also are ignored since they were only given a number and gender. Only one of the 11 actually got a name and in fact we have the most info about him when it comes to his personality. Sister is talked about a lot more but I still don't feel connected to her in any way even though I know so much about her. Its like she's just used as a guide to the new world for MC and a little info broker for her brother sometimes. MC is very caring and loving towards his friends and family and is always working hard but I haven't seen a single flaw from him making it difficult to relate too.
World Background: I really like the world background, all the plants and animals with their own special habits and uses is something I find very interesting. I read another novel that went on and on about the smallest detail only to not have any use but in this novel I see that every description is useful or at the very least not useless. The world is a primitive forest with bugs the size of a child and animals meters big. Their a few magic animals and plants that have special abilities that make the novel a lot more interesting since I'm not a fan of pure urban settings and knowing there are special abilities and lifeforms I can look for exciting fights in the future. The forest is called the "Southern Wilderness" or something similar so I think that later on MC will spread to other regions.
TL;DR: Good translations and the story is very interesting currently. Characters can a little bit of work but the world setting is very well done. Small aspects of magic and the supernatural for now maybe will increase or degrade but I am currently enjoying it.
Small Summary: MC wants to make a tribe after the tribe he was in was destroyed and with the help of his sister and friends he makes a base for his new tribe to be settled but since there is only 5 people they will need to lure in new people to join. MC is from earth and uses his knowledge to make his little tribe prosper and so far has already added 11 people. Every tribe has their own divine protector and MC was very lucky and found a powerful one. Its not said that if its actually a god like its praised as since in his destroyed village the god protector never showed up but at least the one he found is real.
I'm still in chapter 7 but i think i should leave a review here cause i love this Novel
Writing quality - Superb! The author's writing style seems very experienced and reminds me of the sort seen in translated series.
The plot so far seems really promising, I can already see the foreshadowing for an epic storyline. So kudos to the author for achieving that.
The characters are extremely engaging and intersting to follow, the mc is quite likable so far.
World background ... once again the author has done a good job in describing it too us without making it feel like an info dump.
Really great job!
The idea is good, but the story has no realism at all. I advice those more than 14 years old not to read it as they risk being bored to death. Author should know the differences between a novel and a story for kids.
It’s a great start looking for more ch.7 I liked how you used real life songs .
Not like other urban novels where the MC wastes his time on earth trying to get revenge on the family he has a grudge in the legal way and just goes on a quick killing spree which is nice. Other than the whole Disciple being typed as discipline there arent any typos which is nice
This novel is just the same as Emperor of the World system written by the same author. same plotline and even their system is the same and also their adventures??
Personagens como esse MC são horríveis, eles não têm personalidade, apenas sabem agir como robôs sem emoções.Totally boring apart from the fact that all humans are weak or stupid. That were just to fill the scene
Sorry, the author, you have broken your promise. It has been a long time since you updated, and I am very disappointed. Waiting every day is very painful.
The novel is pretty decent but its not for me, mc gets cucked and tbh hes looking more like a side character to me. *sigh* i dont really know where this is going but im not really interested in reading furthur. Im not saying this is a bad novel by all means i think this has potential but this isnt for me.
Excellent ***** humour and tension building, hilarious wordplay and references, colourful characters, likeable protagonist and hundreds of great tips to dating and ***. Definite must read!