Alright, so far, this story has been a great read.The translation quality is great, and I don't really get confused by any strange phrases like you might see in some translations.Stability of Updates is not really applicable, so I'm keeping it at 5 for the rating's sake.The story development feels nice and well-paced. The MC discovers new things about himself in a natural manner, and his relationships with the people around him also develop well.The character design is just... magnifique! Finally, an MC who isn't completely brain-dead! This guy actually thinks about the possible consequences of his actions, has flaws, works to fix said flaws and, most importantly, actually learns from his mistakes! He feels like a real person instead of a caricature!For the world background, considering this is still only at chapter 60 because of the trial read, I'd say that it's well-developed. Anything relevant to the story gets explored pretty well, while anything unrelated gets a quick explanation before the story moves on. It's not exactly the most detailed and intricate world ever, but it's nice and simple and doesn't detract from the story.Overall, solid 5/5, hoping this gets picked up!
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What a poetic way of narrating just one scene, I liked it.The first chapter does not explain anything but leaves the reader in suspense and floods with great interest to know how it continues.Overall, it's a pretty good opening chapter if you want it to be a long story.
Can you share some other novels written by indian writers I have only seen 3 works of indian . .. . , ... ..
This novel starts slow but is worth it...don't just give up after the first few chapters.. Stick with it and the story keeps getting better. A few hiccups here and there but nothing that takes away from enjoyment..
That earnest skill. That’s bull**** on every single level. Leveling probably on a generous amount gives you lets say 20 stat points right? So if you level up to 20 and come back to murder level one trash mobs you can become god. I like quick novels, but all the curses just make him seem like a absolute fucking retard. He played the game for 7 years and he still fails to be calm, and still acts like an immature little *****. No fucking wonder his team only made it to c-rank. Any rational human being who has a brain of any sort can make a better team with his resources. So make him an actual veteran or make him a retard choose one not both.
Something is wrong with the privlage system so I'll new chapters are not able to be seen I still see the chapter count rising but maybe they don't know what is happening
The synopsis has many errors. This is a novel based on a VR game that merges with the real world at a later date. It is also in the year 2071. A typical OP MC video game protagonist who died after the worlds merged and was reincarnated back to when the game first came out. Using his knowledge of the game he becomes OP.Not for me as it is so cookie cutter you could bake an infinite amount of the same cookies with it.
Not worth for reading at all. Another story ruined by this translator and a writer.If the translator is good enough, he would not destroy this potential novel like this one. A writer should pick a good translator so readers can read more, and not be lost by this abrupt ending.
is mc really a simp,is tat major simp or minor... curious before reading,i ain't reading if he's a major simp.................................
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Hello, Let me just start out with saying I very much enjoy this book. I will admit the slow updates get to me but anything worth while always takes time in my opinion. So more then willing and able to wait. Author please continue this book as it brings me much joy and a look forward to seeing it further along. I know in chapter 170 you left some negative remarks but don't put yourself down. You have a great idea going and I look forward to seeing it grow. I did leave a comment for some ideas if you would like to check back on it. (To lazy to rewrite the whole thing). I can't wait ( really I can take your time lol) for the next chapter. ( ◜‿◝ )♡