Hope u can write more and try to fix your grammar even abit is alrdy good and hope u can try to increase more chapter. btw the girl blackrose i think is either dumb or stupid want to kill mc when he can kill an elite monster it a demon monster somemore like is she dumb or too cocky just because she is top 10 for top rookie lol..try to make umm npc abit smart dont make npc like dumb u know like other novel mc everytime get involved with people just because he is good at stuff they are not but in the end he kill thhem ugh this is wat i kinda hate . anyway love your novel for now :3
No idea how this has gone under radar! This book is AMAZING! In a way reminds me of The Legendary Mechanic... but that may be why people see the book synopsis and skip it.Yes it has an NPC as the main character... So what? It’s not a new concept, TLM wasn’t first to do it! Either way, the story is superb. I love the idea that an NPC can break the game, but I don’t like the idea that the Devs would just sit back and not do anything or investigate...Like in sayyyyyy... The Legendary Mechanic?I also enjoy the view of the NPCs vs the Players, it gives a darker theme to how video games work and the insides of NPCs.The lack of updates is understandable, one, it’s an original novel, secondly it’s been out for quite awhile now... and I was the first to put any Power Stones into it! So many people write good things about novels like this, but never bother to put in support! I will be putting in Power Stones to this novel every day!
I Love the idé that all monsters and animals koms from eggs and that they evolv to bad we wont see any more of this story ?. I just somone will be kind and kontinuye this story it was great reading!?!?
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND UPDATE IT REGULARLY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
One funny underrated story. On this app I like the comedy and punches it have some weird funny moments too.Like cutting balls and yaoi stuff ???????
I love how their story went because it's so refreshing.it has something that other story (mostly) doesn't have?I love it. So please continue writing this story cause it's fun to read?
pretty great book so far will highly recommend. has a great pacing and interesting characters. if you are looking for a new story to start don't hesitate to pick this one up
WTF... Why is a story that was dropped being picked up again??? And why the heck were we voting on it if it was a story that had been dropped and picked up again.
All this person as basically done is go to the ben 10 Wikipedia and copy all the episodes plots for each chapter. A blatant copy of the original work.
A warning to anyone reading this novel, this is plagiarism. The author has pretty much word for word copied the original story on royal road with the same exact title as well. Despite what the author may think, simply putting (fanfic)in the title, briefly mentioning that it is a fanfiction in the summary, and adding the original author's name does NOT make this any less of plagiarism. First off, the story is not listed as a fanfiction. As you can see by the tag, this is listed under the category of video games. What does this mean? It means that the author is able to make money by claiming this story as an original story under the webnovel system. Webnovel does not care if you briefly mention that this is a fanfiction in the summary or elsewhere, as long as you do not register it as a fanfiction, it will be considered an original novel. This author is stealing the work of another person, probably without permission, and even registering it as an original novel. Secondly, for something to be considered a fanfiction, it must adapt, modify, or change the original work in some way. Skyrim: Dragonborn Within along with many other stories on this site do this well, because only the setting is borrowed, not the entire story word for word. Even if the so called "author" of this story were to change the story later on, there is no need then to copy the beginning. He could ****** provide a link to the original story, and where his/her own story starts. In fact, they save themselves the time and effort need to copy and paste the original story, so unless the author is seeking to gain something for himself, there is no reason he/she cannot do this. A good example of this is the adaptation of mythran's "master of all." The adaptation starts where the original story was dropped, and the author even got permission from the original creator. If I were to try to publish the Harry Potter books, simply claiming that it is a fanfiction would not protect me at all from a copyright strike and possible charges. I can't just add one more book then publish the first seven or so books along with it saying "Well, it's a fanfiction so I haven't plagiarized." This is the same. Legally, you can get sued for this kind of action. It is also just morally wrong. Why would you try to claim someone else's work as your own? You can't get much money from this anyways, and you might as well write you own story if you want to be recognized. Leeching off of other's achievements is not the way to go. Also, the author has put a bunch of five star review for himself, because other people have recognized these points, and so the author must try to spam five star reviews for self-validation. If everyone else is giving you one star, the problem isn't with the other people, and the solution isn't to give yourself good reviews. The problem is you, and the solution is realizing your faults, and trying to change. All this leads me to believe that this author is a terrible person in general, and that any reader is better off finding some good, original, stories. If you're reading this review, you've already spent far too much time paying attention to this story and should move on.
I'm totally in love with this one. Great plot and amazing writing style. The development is smooth, the characters are absolutely great. Great work author.