Anyone has the raw title? it seems to have been changed. can't find it.
Modern day novels are basically impossible to understand. Like the moral cover of these characters are nonsensical. I’ll try to explain.
At one point the MC just straight up got a bunch of creatures to commit genocide on a bunch countries to spite one guy.
All I’m saying is if you’re raised in the modern day by a good family with traditional values there’s no way you would do this. Especially because moral actions impact cultivation.
This is because karma is an aspect of this novel. Committing misdeeds brings bad karma and punishment from the heavens. So the MC speaks of doing good deeds and not accruing bad karma unnecessarily but then goes and does this. Even if he can offset the karma to his clone I don’t buy it. His power up relies on teaching cultivation to as many people as possible. He just burned a fortune for no reason.
So the MC is just a hypocrite with a nonsensical moral code. The characters are flat and dumb. The world of the novel is also just boring.
Skip this one.
The MC Should not start to kill police officers without any reason. The MC mistakenly killed someone and to escape from the police he started to kill. Dude this is not how it works. Change the plot. Either the MC should know that he is killing Felons or the MC and Police should both be a part of the escape program and the bullets are fake. An MC should not go on a pointless killing spree of Police Officers. A MC is like a light(maybe he shines in the light or hides in the darkness). An MC can never kill innocents. This goes against the rule of Protagonists. Or You can also change the crime of Mc and make it that he killed a corrupted high level official and when the police force tries to catch him he only kills the ones who have been corrupt or are up to no good(His system can help him identify the type of police officer the person following him is). This can allow the MC to stop killing innocents and also allow most of the plot to go unedited.
To be fair I understand that enumerating in value helps in understanding and saves effort in the narrative, but let's review: the writer puts the MC at the point of invading the dreams of others. And the best he can create on top of that are points to buy items? There is a whole mystical world to explore. Or you can go to science fiction and develop a dream comparison and use that to create marketing. Or something new: the MC can simply help other people for free, after all there are people, volunteers for a better world or start helping the family and then interact with more people with other problems. Sometimes these texts are so generic and seem like a forced catharsis. There are people in the world besides the MC and it should be the author's job to develop that. Well, if the MC suffers from cold, hunger or violence, is it because other thousands or millions suffer the same and what is the answer to improve that? Hit someone arrogant and run away.
I shall shameless vote my self a 5 on update, thank you for reading on my add free link as a editor and translator and also a author this book is quite good 140 Chapter left to go!!
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You did a very great work author. Full of new ideas and I must say the MC is really strong. Keep going because I'm my opinion it's going to be a very great novel in future
The story initially doesn't balance it's ideas well in the beginning and it did hurt the pacing but it eventually found its groove and I pretty much enjoyed it. Hopefully the story remains consistent but I like what I see so far.
The first chapter had me hooked, I could not stop myself reading it. I'm not going to spoil anything for you it's up to you to read. Every word sent shiver down my spine. I kept reading just to see what happens next.
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The story has a good start, the comic timing is weird but always on point so that's not a problem.
Main character has a good story and interesting mental set up, it will be interesting to see him fall in love. This novel has true potential, let's see what the author does next. Best of luck!
i love the story development on this one,and also the little bit of romance that will come hopefully in a future chapter the characters are good too the only problem i think is the misclick grammar but overall it's not bad[img=recommend]
Devil 000 if your just gonna post someone else's work on web novel app at least post the entire series up to date this has more than 200 chapters yet your putting only 7 though this is a pretty nice series for all the other degenerates out their