i like the story, the writing i'snt the best but i can understand the story so ok.continue the good work please and dont listen ti te negative review autor, you cant make every One Happy. ??
I'm expecting a full cultivation world where mc cultivate and get heroines but this is just somewhat japanese like fantasy with a drop of cultivation. And the progress of Mc cultivation is so slow that it feels that strength doesn't matter, he doesn't even cultivate. But meeeh, nvm.
The author knows how to make his storytelling interesting! I really like reincarnation to the past novels and this story has a potential to compete with the top ranking novels in the future if given the time.
Congrats in advance author!
Hope you will make review on my work called Lumia: Other World.
Amazing concept with a lot of potential
But the author dropped and rushed the ending out of nowhere a bit disappointed but who am I to critique his decision to drop at least he finished his work
If done well this could be a really good novel but at the same time it could end up really crap. id like to see which one itll be just so i dont miss out on reading it if its done good
Okay, I read 4 chapters and I got bamboozled by my own brain. I thought it was a novel about the mc studying 'monsters' like in goblins or ogres. So, I thought it was okay, but it's just the mc getting smarter.
Don't get me wrong, the characters are interesting and nice, the difference is clear, although some might be very disturbing (that's why the 4* stars for it)
The novel self is nice, world background is just a modern world obviously. Story development is something I cannot explain because I only 4 chapters but it's interesting, definitely recommend it.
But, okay, that's my review, I hope other people won't also get bamboozled by the title of the novel like me.
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Very good novel
Better than King of Hollywood
I hope this one and the Cultural Isekai novels get picked because they are 2 great novels.
Slap to the crybabies
Very an enjoyable story and smooth to read. Enjoyed the storyline and found it very interesting. Completely recommend it! Keep up the good work author
Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo novels HOWEVER
you should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath"
if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anyway
i cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from here
the story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 here
Characters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1
the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers
suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied.
best of luck with your novel
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I just love love LOVE this story! I can't stop reading after a chapter and that is good! Every character ropes you in and I fricken love the humor! Great story!
Sooooooooooo Gooooooooood ....................................................................................................................