It is pretty good,not that bad at all. Just wish you would update more. Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice!
should be another copy paste story but let's read it and be proven wrong...................................................
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I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.
Moving on to technical issues,
I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.
I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?
All the best!
Did Author just dropped the book???
I mean, he tells us not to read it in the description. Then, why should I bother to even look inside?????????????????????????????????
More please more
The book has the potential. When reading i found not much miatakes but its like no description of Igor and Massie which should have been in the First chapter. I love it by the way....
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Are you the real author or a fake and if your real why are there only 35 chapters here there are 493 chapters on others sites or are you just seeing how it would do here good novel anyway
Horrendously bad grammar. The writers English definitely is not fluent, but it seems like they don't do basic editing. The concepts of the story are pretty decent though.
What a trash and utter rubbish novel. I have never seen a boss who is so underestimated by everyone and has to go around hiding his actual power. The story makes no sense as randomly the power level of the world increases on it own in the middle of the story and suddenly there are stronger people appearing out of nowhere without any proper explanation. Also, which boss goes around listening and following the rules. The idea of the novel was good, the only problem is that the person/author who got this idea is brainless and does not know how to write. He should be lucky that its a novel on webnovel, otherwise it would be found in garbage.
After reading a couple hundred chapters here' s my opinion..ProsInteresting ideas for a worldHis cheat is pretty cool and the things it can do a really extensiveConsEveryone but the main char is 1-d at bestKinda slow progression for such an op cheatEveryone important char is a Male,like all soldier/general even enemies are basically all male, like seriously at chapter 200 there's 4 women who have names (not counting the 2 I mention later)and none are important even a slightly to the storyExtremely over reliance on modern weapons to kill anything,like he almost has enery weapon you can think of and he uses them constantly, Handguns,rifles,grenade/rocket launchers, he even has a freaking assault helicopter and hes using them in a fantasy setting on fantasy creatures,like it would've been cool if he could improve the personal strength of others with his cheat but he couldn't play out his modern warfare fantasy that way I guess.As for why I finally stopped reading, well the main char's enemies kidnapped and killed 2 girl he knew( he just met them), so he chose to revive them with new bodies that were naked while another dude he recruited just watched (he had all the time in the world to put clothes on them before he took them to the revive alter) ,I just hate reading stories where women who are clearly becoming important to the story, just be randomly seen naked by anyone but the MC, it's one of the main reasons I read CN stories instead of JP or US ones.