Bro your book has high potential. Continue writing it and readers will run onto you hahaha. I like the revenge part, its the part that will ignites the fire in each readers emotion. Bro-san jia yo! Love your novel
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It’s rlly funny while also still having some substance and making it an interesting read. I rlly like how the mc superpower is like bc it is op but also has its limits like how sometimes he doesn’t know wut it will hit or wut it will do
Nice book, I think you guys should try out the book called the legend of the glowing blue ring, its the best the author has made almost ten books now 6 or more will come out this week
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Uhh is it really a novel based on realistic element?? I mean which middle school player can defeat a 'very good' high school team top scorer
Great story so far but some grammatical errors here and there. I love the dialogue, it's pretty realistic and seamless. Kudos!
Just don't know why it's taking them eternity to get to know the identity of the kidnapper, it's quite obvious...
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I haven't read it yet, but i know its great. Why ? Cuz i can feel it.
I saw this novel last week and the first thing i noticed since then is the release rate, and its pretty cool. I'm gonna wait some more chapter to read, but i know i'll enjoy it. Keep the high release rate and i'm sure u'll reach something. Thanks. :D
I will be honest, I didn't give the summary much thought and tried this story. I couldn't get past 4 chapters. Only after reading first few chapters did I realise how absurd the story setting was. MC was trapped in a cave on first day of game and was in there for 1000 years. After he came out he immediately remembered his novice mission. All the time while being trapped, his biggest worry was he would get left behind in game.
It just shows that author doesn't know the weight of a 1000 years. Also while being alone trapped in a cave. That amount of time would destroy him. Even if his body was okay, his mind would die out cause it cannot keep working in extreme despair for a 1000 years. He would be brain dead.
Yet when MC came out, he was perfectly normal and first thing he worried about was game.
Author could honestly choose much more believable circumstances. It's like he didn't even bother his brain to spend some cells thinking about this story. I can honestly just imagine what the future quality would be.
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