I decided to read this from all the positive reviews but im incredibly disappointed. This novel is your ,average full of cliches, copy of all the novels that came before. Extremely unoriginal.
The correct way cultivation books should be written. Hoping for new chapters.
A poorly written good story.
There are too many grammar and present/past tense mistakes. Sometimes the phrase won't have any meaning and you'll have to try to guess what the author meant.
As for the story he usually rushes with the story part but is really slow and descriptive with the crafting part, which some might like and other might think is tecnobabble (like me).
Nevertheless, these rushed parts are still interesting and coupled with the MC upgrade ability, made for a nice story.
The author should cut a little on the crafting part and improve more the plot with interesting events in the sect with other people or ****** more adventures.
You should also add more challenge and stick to your power ranks. The MC wins too easily and too over his own level. Him as a rank 1 killing rank 19 is quite ridiculous and undermines your own system.
Also there are some really stupid plot devices like Strong Cultivators not interfering in an attack on the city by bandits because it's an attack made by the young generation and they don't want to get involved because of pride, the old can't fight the young or something.
I facepalmed when I read this and almost dropped.
marvel vibes honestly but yeah good one lol .
The novel is fairly conventional and like many others in its genre, but well written and well chosen. Judging by the chapters that I read, Alexander may not be the emperor's son or even a girl. development is a bit slow but overall not bad
this one of the best novel for sports genre even if it's translated because it's just too good , man keep going
Awesome story dude...keep writing such amazing stuff..
everything is forced literally everything
This is my my novel on sport genre. If there are any mistakes or concerns, please feel free to point them out. Thank you.
Time for a shameless review.
Here, there will be some answers about the story.
1. Will there be a harem?
Answer: No there won't be.
2. Will the MC get younger?
Answer: Yes, he will get younger physically. You know, since he cultivates immortality, the stronger he gets, the younger(physically) he will be too. (Quasi-spoiler?)
3. Will it be updated regularly?
Answer: Yes, it will be updated regularly. But sometimes, there may be a reduction.
4. Is his system annoying?
Answer: No. His system is the silent type. Generally, it doesn't talk, it only gives out text.
5. Will the system force the MC to do something?
Answer: No. It will at best put a mission. There may be penalties in the future, but fret not, those penalties won't threaten the MC's life nor his power.
6. How does the system work?
Answer: This system won't force the MC to do anything as I said above. The only way the MC can get stronger is by cultivating strong people. But maybe there will be a slight change to it in the future. Btw, he also gets stronger by cultivating himself too.
7. Is the MC stupid?
Answer: Lol, in almost all novels, MCs are not stupid. My MC is an old monster, therefore, he's not stupid. The side characters are not people who will come to provoke the MC straight out like a fool too.
8. Will there be face-slapping?
Answer: There will be. But there won't be the generic face-slapping like you see in some novels where it was displayed once per 2/3 chapters.
9. How is the world background?
Answer: With just the synopsis, genre, and tags, you can guess it yourself.
10. English is not my first language, so there will be mistakes inevitably, but I will try to reduce them as much as possible.
11. You, yes you, my readers, don't forget to vote for my novel too!!!
Ahhh another story with an interesting enough premise, made worse by a turd of an MC and the "comedy" that comes along with one.
There's the usual trash trope of doing everything he can to hide what he's gained, while saying he needs to stay low key, but then does idiotic things for seemingly no reason that draws attention to himself.
The translation is good at least, and the score is bumped up due to the fact it's a trial read and I'm not gonna drop the score for stability of updates.
But the story development seems to be going nowhere fast as it keeps getting sidetracked with shenanigans, along with him only getting new products weekly so there'll likely be a lot of filler between things actually happening to improve his situation.
For characters the MC is naturally a turd as mentioned before (greedy, scammy type that can't pull his head out of his posterior long enough to make use of what he has), while the comic relief in the form of his family isn't the worst, but will likely get old fast.
World background is what it is, modern day but the MC's family is lower class and struggling, while the turd MC is making things more difficult for them through his greedy, scammy shenanigans. Sure he brought home a lavish meal he used his cheat to get from a restaurant in a nonsensical scenario, but the idiot can't even remember to pick up his sister from class which causes his mom to lose her job when the school calls and she has to pick her up.
Overall, gave up at chapter 20, might read the rest when I'm out of everything else to read.
its a good novel but not my type.
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