This is just bad. The setting is barely mentioned beyond a couple brief paragraphs of exposition. The MC has a system. The entire plot seems to rely on a series of "funny" misunderstandings to move things forwards.
SUMMARY is a BAIT MC can summon BOSS monsters BUT in a sealed state. The attributes are 10% or less of a boss monster and will unlock as MC increases his level.That's okay but the Summoner Job is shown as Trashy and MC getting ridiculed is getting on my nerves.Also, repeated mention of the BEAUTY of the MC is making it sound GAY... I am not into that....
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Okay, the updates in order make no sense. You went back and edited your story and it caused the chapters to go from talking to a teacher to fighting moonlight with a summon that we never read about.
The sudden increase in tention actually surprised me because this novel had started giving me a relaxed feeling (and kinda boring) xD but the minor plot twist in your latest chapter was actually refreshing and enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work @Shallowheart
the jumps in the story were a little hard to follow and it feels like the author makes jumps and assumptions about what the reader knows far to often but the richness of the characters and the back ground development while being spotty and hard to follow really carry this story
Hiya writer ,I love the plot. The story is intriguing. The plot,synopsis are to the point. I love the adventure of MC. Hope it would be a mass hit in future. More power to you.
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This is an epic. It is really thrilling and I love the suspense. It is making me curious. waitiwaiting for next chapter. I loved the character of hazel park and Kate Evans.
you are a good author, keep up the good work .l'm so excited to know what is going to happen .please finish it quickly l need to know the end of it.
I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this.Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality.Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel.The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development.Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think.The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent).And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings.The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story.As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story.For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief.All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following.I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story.Keep up the good work, it's really good.
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