A must-read, worth every page turned.
The story is alright, there are some grammar mistakes here and there but not to many, not a bad read but isn't an amazing one either. I think with a little more work, and editing it can be a pretty decent read. Keep it up the more you work on this the better you'll Improve. That's all I got to say but this is a pretty ok story, keep up the good work.
I love this novel!! You got me hooked already in the first chap and forced me to binge the rest! If this keeps up I might start spending on patreon for the first time ever!
I recommend this novel to people who love this genre of novels. The author has done a great job at describing his characters, designing the world, and setting the vibes for each scene. The characters are not doing stuff for hidden reasons that make no sense when they are revealed and I love Mr. Hayashi's dream of his son marrying an idol and the little shrine for TWICE and BLACKPINK.
It’s a Nice book, i higly suggest everyone to read it, there is everything, romance, action, horror etc.
I feel deeply sorry for the protagonist and i hope he will Find his wife.
Well this is your typical writer, writing a review for his own work.totally not based and I'm definitely not doing this for the troll line heh heh :)
I dropped it in chapter 134, so the review is obviously up there.The characters and the story are clichéd and without depth, but it's something common in this type of literature (a drunk who sells the castle's lighting to buy booze completely changes his personality and vices and nobody thinks it's strange? The goddess of alchemy working as a maid for two years for someone she hates and despite the powerful father, he sends a bodyguard who at the time was weak to protect someone that any nation would do anything to get their hands? Yes, sure...).But here the lack of human reactions/emotions from the MC and other characters makes the history worse... and to make it even worse the MC just reacts to what happens around him and has no goals...Does he want to expand his empire? No, he just react to aggression (which usually doesn't make sense) to counterattack and conquer territories.Does he want to gather his brides? No, on the contrary, they are the ones who, thanks to the plot, go after him.Do you want to get or beat the parents who abandoned the MC? No.The only thing he does is follow the system blindly, without the ability to make decisions of his own.Another point is his lack of character or humanity... Basically in chapter 133 he killed millions of innocents (whether men, women, children, babies, passing travelers, merchants...) for something he saw in a dream?! And immediately after that he makes a joke using hid intellectual level equivalent to a 5 year old child with the "bride" he called but forgot because he was busy doing genocide. The author must have put this in as comic relief, but it's so stupid it's pathetic instead of funny...I had already seriously thought about dropping it when, a few chapters before, the MC in 2 minutes of conversation decided to kill all the officers of a guild (at the time he killed the two leaders) of merchants and stole all their goods, because they had more soldiers than allowed and have been disrespectful and arrogant, and to make matters worse the other merchants of the nation are worried but then they are calm when the king "explains" why he did it, without presenting proof or without making a judgment... who would entrust their money and your life to such a king and government as this? Not even in the Middle Ages would kings do something so stupid. I had hope that the story would get better, but everything (both the story and the intelligence of the characters) got even worse.
Unbelievably I managed to comprehend that this novel would be trash, simply from the title. I don't know if this is indicitive of how deep my cultivation has become or merely a miraculous epiphany, a brief insight into the most obvious truths of the universe hidden from our naked eyes. But based on this understanding, this answer to a question I never thought to ask I leave this hint of the unfathomable to my wondering brothers and sisters. 1☆.
The novel is good, but a lot of the information is nonsensical and some of the MC's actions are illogical. Chapter 160 it is unclear what he did to the Elf is a mystery in other chapters it is not described what happened. He knows a lot of forbidden techniques, but doesn't know the evil double cultivation of using women as a cauldron of cultivation.
I don't have much time but.
I wanted to use my remaining 1% battery to express my love and passion about this novel, although mc is a bit
Kinda boring not gonna lie... the translation quality is also kinda bad... like... you can read it... but it feels kinda forced. The book is also boring as all hell... ive read like 20 chapters and all he was doing is like opening lootboxes and that is the content for that chapter... rly boring.
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