I tried to read but I dropped it in chapter 42, the author says that the protagonist is smart and always thinks about everything before acting, but in 42 chapters he has already made many stupid mistakes...
The book is great. But what disappoints me is that the writer isn't puting must effort on such a good book. I hope the completes the book and not just throw way such a book
I love this sTory so much and i hope thAt it can update more . The characters are so amazing . and the plot is just so good❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Read only until chapter 6... From what i could see this is a novel based on forced ridicule situations just to create tired old slapstick comedy... As for the scientific part, good luck if one can find it.
A decent story this far, if not a little cliché. I would continue to read it if it gets picked though I would like to find the raw if anyone has it.
Author here!~This novel will be hentai intended so be careful, although its not every chapter but it would sometimes appear so KIDS begone from here!~I didn't give full 5 star since although I have confidence on my own writing, it wouldn't be same in other eyes (you! yeah you!).Its not like I'm genius in English, so I'm taking full minus star for this flaw as my motivation to improve though I doubt that no one will pick it since I'm sure cliche review will appear about it.
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The quality of your story is very high more like excellent. At Chapter 64Slice of LifeMusic ~ Idol ~Character DevelopmentWith a great stage description for every time the Mc perform.Highly Recommended.
Five stars all!! Even tho it has 0 Power Stones its still deserve 5 five stars for me ???? its still fun reading this novel ? good quality!?
........................................................................It was good, but needs improvement .The author can do better.The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading. Some may know but mostly won't.Anyways Good work!Keep it up!
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I remember reading this to like 400 chapters and then quitting using mtl. I loved the beginning. This story uses the premise of lord if mysteries and adds some pretty unique ideas.... and that's where I stopped liking it. People say if you like lord of mysteries then you'll like this. I just wanna say... it was true at the beginning. Then he turned into a ....SPOILER COMING UP:......Ot started off great. But there is one interesting quirk about his system. Yes. He has a system. He gets exp points by killing other beings, including humans. At the beginning he is against killing other humans for exp.Then at some point his inhibitions disappear. At one point he goes and murders a whole lot of other magical occupational people like him (it wasn't his fault, kind of, he was out of control and being controlled). But after he gets away his only regret is that he couldn't get more pointsThat's when it started getting iffy for me.I'm not looking for a story better or as good as lord of mysteries, but since people kept saying it was a good replacement while waiting for updates I thought I'd try.It's not bad, but it's not good for me. The mc is nothing the lord of mysteries mc. He world building is good but some things get looked over. The mc was pretty good but then he began turning out like typical power hungry mc.There are reasons for why he needs for (there is this character trying to kill him) and the world is changing.Honestly, it's not a bad novel. I just think my expectations were too high. The character and plot development need serious help. But everything else is okay.