Author done a great creation. The way author potrait the character is best. I'm telling you once you start to read this novel. There is no return❤️ If you thinking about start reading this novel. Just start already ?
Good story overall writing is good not that many mistakes and characters are good for now plot is good and the world sounds amazing so I'd give this atleast a 4 out of 5
It has the rough edges that a story like this wants, no white knights but a bunch of intriguing characters in varying shades of gray. Honestly, from the get go, you'd want to know what happens next. A very intriguing story indeed!
This book has some of the best world design I've ever read. The characters are extremely well written and have their own opinions thoughts and little qwerks that make them unique. You can clearly see the Author's care for this novel, and I look forward to reading more of the story!
This novel is amazing i read it before in arabic till ch150 and now I can't miss the chance to read it again .The mc isn't OP ,the plot is unpredictable but make sense, the world building is 5 star and u will get shocked as every thing reveals itself as the story develop You can't miss this great work , give it a chance
Don't let the low chapter count fool you, each chapter though short has more story than 5-10 normal chapters. This story might give you whiplash from how quickly it develops. So 80 chapters actually equals 800 of another novel. Other than a problem with pacing the story is epic and full of imagination.Hold on to your hat, because mine blew away!!
Most chapters are long enough comparable to 'novels posted in NU' and it is a good binge reading for a couple of days. The plot and the world building are impeccable to the point of 'there is an actual thought behind some events that may lead to some future developments and may be in the next couple of arcs'. However, there is some inconsistency in the MC's character development like his past trauma that hugely affect his trust of other people especially women, and no clear progression in which or what way his character will end up to be, either he is good or bad. So far, he stands in the neutral side of things and he just wants to be with his loved ones.One thing that I really love about this novel is the way how the author solve the OPness early on in the novel. I thought that the OPness will remain throughout the novel like convenient powerups to deal with the villains head on. Thank goodness that it isn't. There is still the worry that I felt as a reader towards the MC and co. whenever a villain much much stronger than them appears despite of the OPness reavealed early on in the novel.*There are rarely few misspells spanning across the novel but the story is still easily understandable.I am thoroughly heavily invested in this novel and I want to see it to its end. Good luck Crow in writing this until the end and in school!
First an explanation for my score as an "Chinese" reader.TQ: 4 stars for the language (and culture) problem,"translation" can help none native speaker understand most part which is "WHAT'S UP
Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.
This is the author again (shameless 5 star but pls forgive me)Announcement:1. Thank you for the support. This work will be going premium around Aug 2019 (tentative) so please stock up on SS.2. With the chapters getting heavier, please let me know if you're keen to join the Truen army (proofreaders & editors). This role is completely voluntary but I expect serious commitment. This is to relieve some load of Ash my current proofreader who has been doing a darn good job or making it readable. Please thank him for catching all the awful errors BTS before we go live.3. There was some major rescheduling because I realised how blind I was. We are already very much into the second season but I did not separate the chapters accordingly. The mass update of chapters and spam notifications have caused readers to unsubscribe. I sincerely apologise for that on my end. It should not happen again in future, it's fixed now.4. We have both the official fan club discord and my personal discord that I sometimes ask for opinions and updates. If you love this book, please show your support by joining either of them.Rebel Army Discord Server: https://discord.gg/UrtDMXnZero Chan Cult Discord Server: https://discord.gg/RuvtKXx5. I have a character profile google docs (refer to author announcement chapter). However, it is poorly maintained. If you see something that has been missed out, please highlight it to me, thank you!Lastly, I just want to let my readers know that the success of my writing dream would not be possible without you. I cannot express how thankful I am. Every comment, like, gift and subscription means a lot to me.
One of the funniest novel i read s far and i'm liking it. Happy LOLing.Why the hell is this novel in some lonely corner in the website?5 stars out. ....................................................
A really interesting concept. Its like simular to a mix of a few good ones like Regressor novles, iseki, Novel extra. Overal is pretty good so far and look forward too it!