system ✓
fat friend ✓
once orphan, now has a family ✓
the will to 'save' people ✓
the book is good but god bless my soul the peanut gallery is infuriating and annoying
Characters-
This is quite a harsh review, but the MC is too lacking in intelligent and curses are the only thing he knows. The characters are unreasonable in their action and it is insufficient to garner interest to read
As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!
Personal review from the author.
It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader.
First and foremost the writing quality.
It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine.
There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five.
Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too.
But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand.
Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character.
The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars.
About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.
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I liked it for not having a system, the MC could have a type control the technology he can enter the "internet" with his mind understand the machines and a lot more
So far i don't have any complaints.I am at 112 now aka latest chapter unlockable by fast pass.The Mc is not like wuxia protagonist. He understands how the world works and tries to use it to his advantage and takes advantage of the plot of the original story.I recommend this to you if you want a story where the VILLAIN (our protagonist) face slaps THE PROTAGONIST (aka the original protagonist). Overall the writing quality is good(which is surprising in webnovel).I hope the author REAPER will keep working hard on this novel and we will support unquestionably for that.
Love reading and writing wish to read more satisfying stories in the future and more updates everyday ????????????????????????????????
I quite like the novel and pls make kasandra the first wife pls.
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This story is good and shows potential. The only thing I can complain about is the spelling and grammar. If the author/translator went back and fixed that then they would be more popular and would have a happier audience. It ruins the mood when you have to unscramble letters and do detective work once every couple of paragraphs to figure out what's going on.