Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark.. I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense. Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!
I really enjoyed reading these chapters, I can’t wait to see what happens next. So far so good.? ? I love it so much.❤️ ? ? ? ? now I'm addicted, can't stop reading it. Reading is my favorite thing to do.....
A well written story that clearly has a great deal of thought put into the world and the characters living within it. I have thoroughly enjoyed the clever plots and schemes as well as some of the combat and I find myself anticipating future events.It pains me that this story remains relatively unknown. I will follow it to the end.
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I think this novel has something interesting... its been a long time since I read a novel with multiple leading characters and it's very good written.Expectant about future development !
I like it a lot. It was written very well and the author sure has a lot of talent. I don't usually like fantasy, but I enjoyed every chapter and I was unable to stop reading.
Listen Author, Please don't drop this one. I am loving it. Great one from the beginning till the continuation. Recommended to all fantasy lovers.
I give this 5 stars I usually didn't care about mistakes or grammar error. Once I enjoy reading story it excites me the most. Let's back to the story, traveling time, is like a dream come true if you have something you want to change. You can do it just a snap of your fingers. Even if you make a multiple mistakes you can repeat it again and again and change it until it was perfect. I'm excited to know more about your story keep up the good work author!
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What can i say... I like its summary... Surely eye catching... World building okay too.. All about human and demon i like it... But for MC... I try it but more i read more i hate it... 80 chp.. But this MC i don't understand his logic his way of thinking.. He suppose to be ***** right.. I mean 15 in that kind of world is ***** right... Well i don't think he is naive cos if he does he gonna do what Yan try to do before being killed.. But he not smart type too.. Well saying that he is genius is kind like misleading for me... He talented in cultivation... But his way of thinking is childish and stupid... Well even a 7 yrs old boy burn his face to hiding from his kidnapper in city before being rescue... But this MC show off his face everywhere in place he can be recognize.. Not even trying to go from that place.. Is he trying to get bounty or something (?) And then he keep saying that in this city is safe everywhere is safe no one gonna checking his damn cultivation.. But he wrong.. And wrong .. And wrong many times... When city under attack he still thinking no one gonna check... Hufffttt.... Even police gonna check everyone.. One by one .. When terrorism happen.. How can this MC thinking he not gonna being check... (?)