thanks for making one of the best DXD fanfictions out there. I really love the concept of the story that you have made. I can't wait to see what you have instore for the readers next
Very interesting storyline! Love the inner thoughts of both characters. It's amazing how both characters are acting as the lead instead of only one. Very excited to see what happens next, I couldn't put it down!
I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.
Up to chapter 20.
Absolute treasure. Not to mention the good story, thr translator's notes which are almost extinct on this site are there. There is a real translator and a good one at that. The story is also great so far. Mc is the most realist writer-turn-transmigrator so far. I won't spoil anything. Better read it yourself.
Shameless 5 stars from myself.
As I am a new writer there are surely some or maybe a lot of mistakes. and I tried to maintain my word ratio with every single chapter around 1200 words. But during 20 or so chapters you will find some of my chapters having 1000 words and other having nearly 2000 words however after that you won't find inconsistency anymore... Maybe in some chapters okay.
So please support this book and pray so I can officialize my book.
Thank you.
This is basically a much more reasonable version of a sign in system. You have to actually put in work to get the benefits and there are serious potential drawbacks as well that somewhat limit you. It's an interesting take on the genre.
Yuki Is Love, Yuki is Life and she even slaps Thots who try to touch her Wifu.
If girls love and VRMMORPGs is your cup of tea, you have come to the right place.
(Ps. Be sure to vote so we can read extra chapters)
The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled.
The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.
As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.
Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.
Good job, author!
Decent novel. Quite good so far. Author should use “Grammarly” to fix grammatical error. Its free, so use it. Hope the novel will be better. Good luck author.
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You can have my power stones but you will never have my PIZZA!!!
Only read the first chapter rn and already love the story.
Also my first time to recieve a Quest from an author.
Love it!