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Novel starts off in a rush where nothing makes sense really with a lots of twists out of the norm.I stuck with it because of all the recommendations and reviews, and it all ties into this master-crafted story where everything has started tying in. As of chapter 460 I can say I absolutely am more than excited to see where this journey goes.
Really enjoyed this hope it continues
In all honesty I am enjoying the book, my main issue with it is the grammar. Many of the grammar mistakes could be easily avoided by using Word’s spellcheck or something similar. I understand it’s not the authors first language but technology exists for a reason. If it wasn’t for having to correct the grammar every other sentence, I would most definitely enjoy the book a lot more. Also it doesn’t sit well with me that we pay for the chapters and receive that kind of quality. And yes you can argue that I’m choosing to buy them, but in all honesty I just keep reading in hopes of the grammar getting better.
Currently read to 10th chapter, most of the mistakes are minor with a few paragraphs that don't make sense until you read it 3/4 times letting your brain automatically fix it. That ruins your story2nd annoyance is not being clear of what the **** is happening, yes MC reincarnated into past and has to fight some creatures but1 what planet are they on2 how many cities are their, you said 1 then later said their are others3 how much time has passed since continents disappeared4 how did continents just disappear- if they submerged underwater then in another part of the world another continent should have risen
I really enjoy how this is turning out I read every new chapter when i can as most of the time I'm at work so I cant read the chapter immediately I recommend this book.
Cant wait...nice stories.......beautifull little girl ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
THIS BOOK IS PLAGIARIZED! THE REAL AUTHOR IS NOX VOCIFERANS FROM WATTPAD, THE AUDACITY OF YOU TO CLAIM IT'S YOURS. ??? YOU JUST LITERALLY TRANSLATED IT TO ENGLISH??? WITH NO PERMISSIOM FROM THE ORIGINAL AUTHOR?? AND THE TRANSLATION IS NOT GIVING JUSTICE TO THE ORIGINAL WORK BTW ?
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I read this up to chapter 23.I think the author did a good job in writing this book. The quality is excellent, and the writing is neat, and everything flowed nicely. I can see that the author is a fan of sci-fi and did some homework as well. Although it's still too early to tell about the story development, so far, the story is moving on nicely. It was not too rushed or too slow. I quite enjoy reading this novel.Anyway, good luck, author.
at chapter 45 and I think it is a good read, the premise is common but the characters are intriguing.but I think the author made the MC too OP while lacking much life experience from any of his two lives which just leaves him not knowing what to do with his power and leaves the mc in a very passive state to the plot. there are reasons for his naivety, from his previous life his old habits carried on but the fact that he doesn't seem to be learning or progressing as a character and the way his behavior doesn't really match his actual age is a bit off putting. but I believe there's still a long way to go and the author seems to have lots of ideas in store for this novel