The studio and the house were 10 minutes by foot.
"Yes, during the tribal era until we were almost wiped out by a heavenly existence... the Heavenly Volcanic Drake..."
This a possibly good story in the making but it’s hard to understand. It’s needs more meat in the chapters. Bc it feels like your skimming through what could have been an amazing fight. Also you need and editior or one with a lil more experience no offense to that person.
"You possess the Toxic Spirit of Achyls. How are you still alive? Your fate is blocking me from seeing everything."
Carla "you two idiots if it weren't for me and Mia would probably be always fighting having muscle for brains".
Sarang looked deep into Chinhwa's gaze with her nose flushed and runny, her eyes glistening from the tears left behind and her small stained face.
I am a fan of cultivation novels and this novel is definitely readable.even though it's not the best still enough to pass time so give it a try.
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
first of all, this novel has very good grammar, so it's better than half of the stuff on this app. the interactions between characters are really well written and don't feel like a cardboard cutout, only problem is that chapters are kinda short ?
Hello guys, I'm the author of this Novel who is shamelessly leaving a 5 star review.. I really appreciate every new reader, I really do... My story has only began.. and it has a long way to go.You see, my dream is to make an anime. On the same level as Naruto.so please help me on this journey to achieve my dream... Thank you all ???
really great plot so far! I enjoyed it a lot!
Omg I love Bia and Kyles dynamic so much its so cutee ?? I really like the pacing and how he gradually gets stronger ?Its such a good read and Im excited to see S2 unfold ?