this novel is different and interestingand I hope that this novel will be interesting in future days too. ?????☺️☺️
Came here looking for the fantasy version of legendary mechanic but I found a retarded version of Night Ranger instead. Seriously Npc are dumber than rocks and translation is just bad.
It's good, surprisingly. Raw?
I believe this is a great story. But There is this long stretch after the initial struggle of cementing himself as the top player where stuff just fell in his lap because "Plot". personally i don't like that kind of writing because instead of it seeming like "A convenient misunderstanding" it ends up feeling like everyone else is dumb and then that takes me out of the emersion of the story. It made me stop caring about the main character as at a point I knew that everything was just going to fall into his lap anyway. It became so predictable that I could skip dozens of chapters and I didn't feel like i missed a thing. I actually became more interested in the side character interactions than the main character himself. Sometimes failures make the main character more interesting and makes the story less predictable. He doesn't have to win everything. Failing in a few minor events and a couple major events brings life to a character, especially when it is a failure that I was rooting for him to succeed but didn't despite trying his hardest. then learning from that important failure and moving forward. unreasonably making everything drop into their lap kind of makes the character boring. After a while the tension in the story was no longer there. I personally think you should have kept Cervantes as a rival to Leo way longer than you did. I also think that you should have used the ChaosBringer as another rival to the MC. As it stands he wasn't a very flushed out character. From the beginning of his introduction he felt like a character that was just there to pass the reigns of the uprising to Leo. It would have made the middle of the story way more interesting in my opinion. As there would have at least been some tension and a threat to Leo's life. A 4 way struggle between chaos, Cervantes, Leo and the demon king. With pink lotus coming in later to disrupt the natural order. Instead everything fell into his lap in predictable fashion. it became the predictable OP,super lucky, MC troupe.despite all of the criticism I wrote this was definitely one of the more well written novels I have read. You still did an excellent job writing it. I can't write like this so I still think you write better than the vast majority.
Good book.Let's make it official guys. Wanna see more chapters and the character's progress with the book of knowledge and the other worlds power's and god's
MC transfers to this world and possesses a system-like thing which requires him to perform a task. Should he fail to accomplish the task, the system turns back time to when MC was first given the mission. It keeps doing this until he is able to accomplish what the system asked of him.On another note, this is probably one of the funniest MC's I've ever read in any novel. The author has jokes everywhere throughout each chapter and MC's interactions with other characters is also pure gold.
Finally! Finally! They brought back one of my favorites. I thought it was no longer on Webnovel. But they just transferred it to this new page!Lumydee's!... keep posting, please!
I honestly enjoyed it, it wasn't overpowering with plot holes at every turn like the other similarly titled novel. I felt a calm atmosphere but as if something was moving under the surface. I don't know if it's because I was reading it with "Nightcore Demon Mode [LV] /Weeb like me" as the BGM.Just to clarify, I don't speak English, I don't know what the song means. I just like the beat.
Let's see, if you give him a glass of water you get back a swimming pool. So, if you hook-up your disciple with a girlfriend, would you get back 10000 girlfriends or a girlfriend 10000 times prettier? Just asking.
Author, I beg you, please, please, please update Daily Life With A Lilim. This has become my favorite novel, please update it. €€€€€€€€€€¢¢€€€€€€€€€€
lately i kinda like a villain story where the heroines can hears the villain(mc) inner thought. and this novel is one of it. not only that, this novel shows us that inner voice getting heard by the heroines can have another implication
First of all, props to the translators for working through the medical terms and all that. It must definitely not be easy.As for the novel, 'meh' is really all I can say. The author gets a thumbs up for daring to create a medical novel, that's brave and must have done some extensive research, but the execution of characters and story development leaves much to be desired. The MC is rather uninteresting and the "harem" feels like plot fillers (aka unnecessary and dull).