This novel is great! My only complaint is the slow release rate! Why is it only 14 chapters! One of the best novels i have ever read. Good Job!
I will try keep this short and simple (cus I talk more than I need most of the time lol) It's a very good story! I don't see any real issues with it, and the only (small) thing I thought should be improved was not repeated again, so that is amazing. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't bored out. There are no grammatical mistakes I have seen so you can be assured that when reading it will be fluid. Dialogues are concise yet informational and descriptions are vivid. I did not feel like wasting my time after reading the chapters and do not regret it at all.
Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course.
Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!
"Surprisingly awakens a check in system"... Everything is said once again a novel where the mc is in no danger due to a system where he only needs to check in... Ciao
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Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.
I like keep it up But plEase let there be romance But will I dont want to see all the Mc does it get stronger and if its romance make it 2 wives an elf and a dragon or cat girls
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Writing Quality is standard, which sadly most novels fail to reach, with minor mistakes that the author seems to eventually fix/will eventually fix.Can't complain about the stability of updates, with chapters coming out quick and consistently.The story is developing well, it's not as slow as I was dreading but it's not fast either. Good pacing.Character Design is alright, minor issue of the character feeling shallow although I can't precisely pinpoint why that is. Perhaps it's because there is not much history known about the character and he doesn't seem wise so far however the novel is still new, got far to go and development could end up being able to compete with the best of them.World Background is mediocre at best, we so far know there are 2 worlds, 2 villages, 2 cities, a random kingdom the MC isn't in, 2 towns and a forest. We know very little about all of it by chapter 119 but as before the novel is still at the start of everything, it can improve.Sorry for the crude review, not experienced in them, just thought I'd give an honest opinion rather than "5 stars great novel".
This book is already online up to 2900 chapters. Same exact translation, I have paid for so much for this book here. What a waste of money!!
The story reminds me of our old MMO days ????I like the twist with the world destruction so much! Keep going please. Go go go Antares save the world!!!
I am certain that nobody reads these trial reads before it gets to us because this is just unreadable and I'm once again stunned by how professional Webnovel is. This is like a really bad MTL at best. Rubbish. 0/5.
absolutely awful. the plot is inconsistent and the character are bland and generally awful cliches. MC is worshipped right off the bat and is OP without doing anything, and his personality is super annoying. this novel doesnt deserve a high power ranking or rating.
i want to read it but its just frustratingly slow so slow that it discourages me to read like nothing interesting is happening even if the interesting thing is coming the prior dialogue and monologue just frustrates me