This is Just a Copy Paste
IDk why the FK this get pass selection?
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well its been a while. still no more than 1 chapter...will this even be translated or what?
RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND
Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing.
Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve.
The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them.
I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
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The book is good no doubt about it Good job
The problem is the mc he's not getting strong at all he's getting weaker every chapter
2ndly his reasonings is so flawed it's borderline stupid like he forgets that he used to b an old soul 00179
3rdly the pure mana requiment hollow thing makes no sense at all his body was made by the best of the best in the world but took him 12year to absorb miniscule mana am like wtf.
Without all this inconsistencies this book would b great I still recommend it.
A well written novel, no mismatch in history. We easily enter the world of the author, and our hopes are never disappointed. I recommend!
Ploufi
it is a really good book with great pacing (in my opinion) and with good and execptional plot changes that really hook the reader in to read more and more of the story.
Its terrible, the grammer alone gave me a headache. There isn’t any real explanations either and it’s laden with so much plot armor, Its like the author can’t be helped to come up with a proper start to the story and wants to immediately jump into the middle. it might not be so bad if there where proper translators.
The story itself is good but there a lot of plot holes, first of all if the Mc had the ability to replay things millions of times since he was born, why is he stupid, he should have memorized many things and become a very powerful figure.
I currently finished all of the chapters as of October 19th, 2021. This story is absolutely incredible and has a lot of potential if updates are continued. The only issue is the stability of updates and besides that, everything is amazing.
High class novel with mystery, dread, action, scheming, adventure, criminals, alien invasion, and criminal organization. Each enemy is greater than the one before.Give you five stars for perfect everything.Please update & don't drop!Please!!!
Just having fubuki as the main romance girl and this not having harem is enough for me to make it like this.................................