Crimnsonsage
the best "emotionless" mc I've read about. Author made his emptiness make sense and not for the sake for them just being emotionless. Really appreciate the author hardworking he put into the story[img=recommend]
How do i describe this novel? Hmmmmmmm- oohhhh i know it!:
CHINA NUMBA WONNNNNNNNM
agh!! We get that china is great, just stop translating these novels for international readers already!!!
Well, i dont know what to say, the positive thing is the translation is quite good, but the story is bleh, i dont read fully just skimming but the story is cliche with arogance young master then protagonist power up ypthen bla.. bla...bla (you know), why cant pick interesting story like -i forgot the title- mc is transmigration devil who make movie? (In trial read, but dont pick up). Is editor in webnovel or whoever choosing the novel cant pick one story that interesting instead of repeating novel with same story but different title
( sorry for bad english),.
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But a author most have confidence in his own work. I just wanted to say that reviews,comments and votes will greatly help in supporting my work. Your encouragement is the key to continue my work.
Great story with some great laughs. the main character has a cute innocent charm about him. I love the supportive family but not sure what the main character love more though it is a hard pick between bananas or his family. the verdict is still out. come and let us join Michu adventure together.
Potential harem warning, and with tsunderes. The tactics employed by the MC are rash and with little logic, such as letting the Gnolls attack at night despite them having night vision because "If they want a fight, give it to them" logic that only serves to "bolster" MC's image to the viewer. Plot armor is also a thing, and non of the town building stuff goes indebt despite all the screens, like why the towns people he summoned don't question anything after suddenly coming to existence, people from actual Greek suddenly came onto shore and just acted like nothing happened and followed the MC just cause. Author also doesn't know any real history, as apparently the only thing he watched was 300 and thinks that all Spartans just wear red robes, when they wore a chest guard and helmet; in this novel MC also makes Spartans throw javelins and then rush with daggers, which is just wrong on so many levels, like how Spartans never carried daggers, or how they mainly fought in formation with and didn't just bum rush with these so called daggers, they had swords, but not daggers. The translation is also pretty bad, sentences just stop for some reason without any context and words are freely swapped around, what's worse is that numbers are also swapped, like in the beginning MC is saved by Spartans, then when showing town info it says he has 0 spartan soldiers, then later says he has 80. These are only some of the issues affecting this novel, it's a novel you'd force yourself to read once you can't find anything else. It had a decent start with a semi-smart MC not thinking with his dick and actually having some form of planning, then it became a Lords Empire.
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Rare Concept , Nice story development , tad bit sarcasm and comedy which is good, hope you stay on main theme dont wave off to only showing his life but also regular power upgrade .
Welp, considering the recent novel of this author which was posted on this site, yet was dropped in mid-way.
I have no hopes for this anyway.
Peace out.
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If you are looking for a tbate clone this is the book for you. But to be completely honest you’d be better rereading tbate. It doesn’t have a majorly different plot, so you basically already know everything that is gonna happen. Also it doesn’t do anything better than tbate only worse. The pacing is very off. It will introduce pieces of the plot that happened in tbate but it won’t go into nearly as much detail or spend as much time on it. Like the academy. Nothing substantial happens at the academy. It is like Hi ADADEMY time!! Ohhh they had classes 1 year later bad thing happens and academy ends. However, even though I have been dragging this book through the mud it isn’t a bad book. I mean I read it, but it just set my standards too high by comparing it to tbate. Like it has the plot elements and characters similar to tbate, but it doesn’t have the essence of what makes tbate tbate.
Tl;dr: It shouldn’t of tried so hard to be like tbate, but still miss the mark.
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