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i hope I can write every day
it has mechs. a lot of mechs. and I like mechs. I may be biased but at least I know my bias. I enjoy my bias for mechs. this is the best mech related story I have ever read. as someone that spent over 100 hours in the Armored Core garage while never starting the final mission, this is right in my strike zone.
Jake's got it rough: a missing dad, an abusive mother and a hidden talent for baseball which sends his mother off the deep end. Sent to live with a foster family, his love for baseball is revived, and with their help, will Jake start to shine like the future superstar he is? This is a really well written story!
I see "kingdom building" TAG and I will support the book
Hello everyone this review is my point of view and I want you all to post your reviews also. This novel is my first work which I am creating with so much care but if there is some mistakes in my work then I am really sorry and I will really appreciate it if you all will love my work more.
Thank you all.
Seeing many people made bad reviews with avarage 3☆s or so, I decided to join in.
The story, ch 19, is quite good as far as I read. It involved an MC with ability that can allow her to play a role in a story. The story is a work of an actual author there in her reality. So, the act she does there will affect the storyline of the actual novel/manga in real life.
I consider it good because:
1. The ln not really rushing, she is not really op.
2. She is a girl that think that she is just a ur-avarage-jane-doe and it's the way she was. (It just recently that she has some people recognise her)
3. She is a traveler. You understand, that kind of novel that travel to new body, new life etc etc), but that didn't made her to know everything and can do every sort of amazing things like how usually other mc does.
4. Her real life is describing about novel author, how webnovel author got his payment, all sort of things author may be thought while writing his/her novel and manga. It just made readers know about author's line of thinking.
Lastly, I'm not really know how this novel will progress in the future as right now there is only some 19 or so chapters, but that is all I can review so far. Thanks for you whoever read this.
If you see some newly released novel(or maybe even the old one), please read some 5-10 ch to judge whether the ln is good or no before you all give a review.
I just recently know that author just paid 5 cent for 1000 words/one reader. The pay is actually not that high-(exception if the ln is well known or it's popularity is high)
Even if Qi really applied payment system for this app, I think that most of the money should go to the author pocket and not the corporation!! Give right to author!!! Yeayeayea!!
P. S
Do forgive me if my grammar is hard to understand as there's may be many wrong spelled and mistyping words or wrong grammar!
I am satisfied as long as you understand what am I saying!!
-Best regards, a sincere reader.
I love this soooo much idek how to describe it honestly great work author! [img=recommend] I would love to find some reference pics in certain places but other than that WOW amazing
This story was generic Mary Sue fun… however after chapter 354 the author seems to have become lazy and basically reset the story and directly ripped off the plot of ‘the most generous master ever’with some name changes…. There’s no point in reading it anymore just read the other novel..
Story is great.Translation after chapter 40 S*CKS.The translation ruined it all. Use Go*ogle Translate or ChatG*T to get a better translation or to edit the chapters
Not going to spoiler anything but do yourself a favor and just avoid reading this. A serialized/commercialized books but the quality is truly subpar. Story doesn't make any sense. everything rushed, plotholes here and there, plain character building/interactions. Some original novels made by people here are miles better than this.
Review is solely based on the free chapters. Who wouldn't want an opportunity to better their health and living conditions? I'm sure everyone wants to experience the whole rags to riches scenario. Seth, MC, doesn't really go from rags to riches, but goes from poor to middle class through his and his family's efforts. In a sense, the author does a great job at depicting how certain groups of people are treated and that is the sad reality. There are many who disregard those with a disability and it's sad. But aside from that, it seems like Seth gets better. Might continue reading to see his progress and I am curious as to what happens to their world because of the asteroids. Regardless of what I wrote, don't forget to test the waters yourself. There are 40 free chapters and that's more than enough to figure out if you like the story or not!