While the genre follows the normal copy and paste format that can be expected of the what’s next section, the book itself is actually quite good. It definitely has me hooked so far and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I don't know why I haven't done this earlier but five starts all around, just think of it as a cultivation novel that is not dog**** and extremely repetitive. With good character writing and fantastic use of human emotion, the characters are real and think logically enough for them to not point a gun at themselves whilst inspecting it.
Thank you author san for this gift to the world, I was starting to get jaded from all the horrible cultivation novels presently.
Will Jeremy be alone forever, without company? I know he will have no companions, but at least servants?Brasil
A lame novel with idiotic characters lameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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your story line is somewhat ok but the translation, grammar, English is terrible so much so that one cannot know what the story line is about. please improve on the English translation
It's bald.....
Babysitter Mc.......
First says time is important.....
And spends time with goofballs..........Instead of levelling up.....................................
......................... .........First 7 chapters .....Blah....
You are a nice writer. I believe you’ll be successful in your book！
Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.
This was an interesting read, very well-written! Really like the protagonist and the descriptive writing style. Hope to see more boxing action!
So far its very interesting. mc past suspense and characters are all perfect and also it would be good if the story picks up the pace ( right now it's a little slow). Also, pls update 3-4 times a week in future also. overall very great.