My only problem is that, sometimes I forgot who is the mc here due to multiple pov. ???
Mainly, the writing is great so far, scenarios are describe very well.The text flows as a whole, too, the reader doesn't have to get bored while reader, one keeps discovering things without really getting impatient or anything.The world background is also well crafted, it's only the beginning so far, but we can already see a good development in this regard.I've enjoy the story so far, keep it up author.That was a nice read
i liked the start of the story really unique and well written it got my attention.....as for the system its really well planned out which is really good.
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So... I think this is my second review, but the story seems to be going great and even if it just another typical Urban Cultivator style novel (even though he is using magic) it is doing the trope justice.
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Only 2 chapters in but it looks promising. Grammer is decent and it's not the exact rehash that most stories use. Hoping the character will be less face slapping and more of a canny MC.
very interesting novel, kind weird to say the truth i don't read too much yet but the MC is interesting really want to see what he gonna do in the future
So far the story was interesting. I hope the author keep up the good work and please do a massive release. Thank you!..........................................................................................................................................
First time ever writing a review on a book, and I'm currently on Ch.126 so here goes nothingicl the Tarik and Gadiel storyline was quite boring at first, but it get much better further on as their relationship grows. Then I realised there story is more focus on Gadiel about finding himself in a world where his parent push their ideology on him, with they guy he likes (Tarik) and how they go about that with the ups and downs of their lives. Irade's storyline in my opinion was by far the best, it was so captivating and interesting, I legit can't say anything less than that. Sakura, storyline to me is a complete mystery (no pun intended?).I love this book, and author keep up the good work.
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Trash mC.. Tf is this? Dont waste ur time in this...