Poor story overall, though it has an interesting premise. There's an overall lack of tension. Basically, the story reads like a summary or report, not that that's all that different from so many other stories on this website or in this genre.
Don't you just love it when the mc of a story is an idiot with low EQ, and always gets dragged around by a girl, whether it's an annoying teacher or popular student? I love that too. It's definitely the best use of everyone's time to have to slog through that ****. Forget just declining to becoming an alchemy assistant and just not go to the alchemy class(that you don't need to go to anyway, because you already know it all), it's always easier to write more chapters if the mc is a dumb cunt and says yes to blow off the teacher. Because saying yes to something you don't want to do is the best way to not have to do that thing, right? Future alchemy god and massive genius... As if I could believe that after this.
It was honestly 5 stars for me until a teammate gets kidnapped and raped. This story was written as a wish fullfilment thing Nd i got to say...I would have died fighting for my people rather than watch this garbage happen in front of me. This is sick and a left turn out of no where for me in an other wise great novel. Too bad. Gotta drop it now.
This is the worst rubbish I've read on this site, the only thing worse than a bad story is a good one ruined by st*pidity, this story could have been so much better, but the author just had to try and turn it to some kind of joke. It's disgusting
Expecting a fun mix of tomb raider and an uncharted like storyline which will be kind of epic and fun to read and i hope to see the storyline progress into a choatic and fantastic episodes on the mc adventure's.
My Disappointment is Immeasurable and My Day is Ruined...................................................................................................................
Don't stop me....i'm pouring all my stones here!Don't you dare!.....................................................................................................................................
this book is one I highly recommend.
likkha jao
in love with this book....
Great read!
really loving this book. can't wait to see what happems