A poorly designed world that runs on gags, the characters seem like they are pulled out of a book at the 400th chapter, which incidentally they actually might be. The system is awesome however it is hardly ever used and in the first 30 ish chapters nothing good happens other than watching a grown man be hilariously petty in an evil sense, it's fun but it isn't special, and unless the system is brought out more or he starts a new story/adventure as his OP self the novel just isn't great yet.
I love the new Scarlett, she so bold and courageous
A wonderful novel and one of the best novels. I have added it to my library. I just hope you will finish it until the end. He put a picture of the cover so that it attracts more people. ??
Craziest novel ever! Like, author writes better than most. He not even famous? Craaaazy! The story has good pacing. MCs not like the ignorant ones you read about. This guys trapped in a virtual world and becomes the villain against 6 others trapped with him. At least you think theyre trapped. Best part about this novel. It has actions mystery and drama! ?
It seems so fantastic, I like it keep it up.
please don't add an ntr it's just fine as it is
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I like this story. The characters are relatable and I am Interested to see the story progress.
One of the best netorase novel . Hopefully it wont get dropped .
Okay, I’m reading this novel; I’m on chapter 2. Honestly, the beginning is funny, and I’m looking forward to the rest of the chapters!........
Can,t say much at this point in time. So far, the pace is alright. World Setting is slowly being introduced. Same with the characters.Hoping to see more chapters soon!
This sci fi fantasy shop building novel offer unique experience for it combination of many cool cultivation style which fit the theme of each country and dungeon elements. The world has deep background story and all characters are shown to be smart and calculative, they have their own personality rather than being brainless and arrogant. That make it so that the drama in this story make sense and not forced showing characters ability to learn and adapt. The fight in this story is also very exciting and keep the reader interested as it feature various method such as fighting from land, naval and aerial warfare with various tech and equipment. The exploration of another world and many POV from other characters are great too. Although the early part of the novel maybe boring, the later part are super epic and exciting. The only problem of this novel is that the progression of the story is super slow even though there are many chapters which is common in these kind of shop building novel, for example the restaurant one. Combines that with non daily update speed make it so that there are a lot of things to be waiting for yet this part of the story hasn't even ended yet. CliffhangerrrrWell, It show that the author has a lot planned for the story development in order to keep the readers excited for the climatic parts but one have to wait for it.Total rating 4.4/5.0 ? and 5 Exp getto daze!