The area started to get a little clearer, she supposed that maybe walking was not such a bad idea. If the black haze had no where to go, it would be all collected into a corner and maybe, just maybe she could purify it.
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“Tian, the Patriarch is waiting for us. Let’s go.”
I started reading this work as a breath of fresh air. Tired of stupid MCs and the power of friendship. And at first the story was really interesting, but then it went down the drain. MC went from the slogan: “If you are not useful, then you are dead” to “If you are not useful, then I will die protecting you...”.I'm currently at chapter 678 and can't read any further. Since the introduction of AI, there has been more water than my neighbors when I flooded them. And why is MC surrounded by idiots? Even the zombie managed to outsmart them? Would it make Lenny look like a genius compared to them? Cheap...A separate topic about battles. Their system is the same: first the MC is beaten for 3-5 chapters and then he admits that he was initially stronger and was just playing around and ends the fight. Of course, in this case, enemies do not die, no, only friends die, otherwise the atmosphere is not right. Starting from 666, he cannot kill anyone, since all enemies either escape or are resurrected. The feeling that he will be humiliated by everyone until the last chapter and will all die together?I was especially upset by the patterned growth of the world along with MS. It all started with the phrases: “Even the gods would envy his rapid growth,” and then enemies and friends began to re-align two large worlds at a time (from Lesser Demon to Greater Demon) in order to correspond...It’s a shame that such an interesting idea and promising beginning slipped into an ordinary watery, formulaic and uninteresting work...
My main issue here is the protagonist: namely, throughout the entire nineteen chapters, he's a baby, so he doesn't really do anything. He's literally just caried around by angels and/or the system 24/7 without any of his own input going into this. You could replace the MC with an actual baby and the plot would be unchanged.
The decent book and plot are a bit unique but I don't really like MC personality. He is hot-headed and a bit of a wimp. Also, I do not understand some of the decisions he makes. Near the start of the book, the principal + teachers are laughing at him and making fun of him and he still wants to stay in the school. Makes no sense as there are literally no benefits to that. Would consider the story average.
author makes the MC a yes man,that blames others for being weak willed and trying help people.And tried to turn him into hero.IF reading this author you suck even more then the cultivation novel where MC can't resist talking about rightness are post to be indifferent then have to save a lady or repay debt.I really hate you authors
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Good novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep upp!!
The Alfa pretended to be really good, even though it was certain that Alex would win. This chapter hangs, so it makes you curious. A little disappointed because the update is late, are you okay, Sis? Passion for writing. I'm still waiting.
so far everything is good but the is one small problem maybe i did not notice it but the seem to be very little information about the cultivation path, i figure moral is warrior spiritual is a mage as for divine could it be with occupation plus a divine ability or something like that? maybe i am wrong. but other that that good book, cant wait for the next update.