Since there is a lack of chapters on which I can comment I have to make due with the present ones.First off, the writing quality is very good. No “obvious“ mistakes and the like. A clear structure with a broad range of descriptions. Easy to read and understand.The introduction is short and precise. No useless babbling about the MC's previous life.The update stability is unclear but we'll see. For now I'll give it 5 stars, since anything else would hinder its path.The story is quite fast paced for the first few chapters but luckily it doesn't seem rushed. Clear and well sorted, the story builds up a sense of intrigue towards the MC.Hand in hand with the story, the character design is, despite being at the start, satisfying. Traits and actions are well presented are catch the characters mood. Later on we will see the extent of the characters potential but the current impression is mostly good.The author avoids long descriptions and babbling, which helps the reading “flow“ and will hopefully stabilies the story. Without all that babbling the story will feel much more “genuine“.The last point. The world background is of course hard to judge since only 6 chapters have been released.We get to know quite a few things in those 6 chapters and I like the fact that they aren't presented in one moment. Often we have some old man the MC meets and suddenly we know everything we need to.The MC knows a lot of things by himself but has to sort them and cannot fully rely on them since they could be wrong or only partially true.He gets some information through some conversation etc. and not a huge amount.I am very interested in where this is going to end up.You have certainly captured my attention.???
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Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
hey author, there are some confusing words after you edited the chapter where they had 3sum. If I didn't look on the comments and read the unedited chapter, some paragraphs doesn't make sense.
As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.
Judging by what I've read so far, it would be one of those MCs that climb up the hatred ladder; he'd first offend strong guys then he'd probably move on to offend stronger guys.The cheat was not that interesting, the power up is just bland, it's not interesting, and there's little suspense either. The MC is boring, there's nothing interesting about him save from the fact that he's a vampire. As of now, he's not that badass yet.It's good to pass time when there's nothing else to read, but it will be boring in the long run.
I like it! he only just helped someone's poison with a dew flower, no names for spoilers, but my lordy there's constantly spelling errors. author seems to have a problem with the letter O cause they can't spell poison or even worst over and over without getting it wrong. overall though I like it, just work on it a bit more
it's sound like LN "reincarnation as sword" or something like that..................... ........................................
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