DaoistSoulTurtle
Hello Juniors, This Ancestor brings you another boring Naruto fan fic with a villain protagonist. Tho, I believe I deserve a higher ranking but, sadly, 5 is the limit, however fret not.As you dive into this forbidden scripture make sure you drop your comments and also I have a fragile heart as I don't want to suffer from emotional damage so please spare me???
I sit by his bedside, silently gazing down on his face, the sourness in my heart unbearable.
Absolute gem of a novel destroyed by the sluggish, nay, almost nonexistent translation speed while being premium.Characters, settings, development, near perfect merge of science, magic and music. This could easily top the rankings but due to the erratic translation schedules it's all lost.Translator should just give this project to another team.
Overall a nice novel to read. At first chapter, u will see a hilarious conversation that shows some of our protagonist. it was very nice but small mistakes are there like 2 to 4 paras might get bore.
The version of the novel you're reading is a rewrite of the original. If you've been around from the beginning then you know what the original was. This current version is a better version with better character designs, motivations, plot progression, etc.
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REALLY GOOD NOVEL I LIKE IT PLZ MASS REALSE AND MAKE THIS A HAREM NOVEL PLZ DONT DROP !! ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????✌??????✌??
Hello Author, I noticed thatbypu like to use quaint and rarely use words which do indeed give the novel a unique and flashy feel but I would advice you to not use them any further unless you can suddenly increase your writing skills by a large margin because using flashy words when your writing skills are not quite there yet will make it harder for you to keep up the 89 same pace and quality of the story. It will make it harder for you to explain certain scenarios without constantly referencing which will give important scenes a rigid feel.sincerely, a fellow aspiring writer.
no me gusto la verdad pero no soy de mete estrecha y le dare una estrella si me preguntas por que no me gusto es solo por la personalidad del mc solo espero que tengas mucho exito en la novela me retiro
I like the story however it's a bit too slow, also democracy is basically mob rule where large demographics in citus will always have more voting power than rural minorities in it thus oppression to minorities rise, a Republic like the United states where their system offers fairness and equality in elections basically is more feasible and just in a cultivation world, people who call the UK or USA a democracy know nothing as they are balanced Republics
The book is amazing!!! I fell in love with each character, their attitudes and their kawaiiness(pretty sure that's not a word, but meh). The 18+ scenes were especially great. As a yaoi lover, I give the story a full five. Only regret is, author-sama hasn't updated it!! Please update soon author-sama! I love it!! ♥ ♥ ♥
Hahito is a real man the goat the story behind this is just amazing I wish I could see it as an anime i would like to recommend it for anyone
