This is my first novel, as a newbie and a female in WN. I know it isn't my usual Barbie, but was a bit curious trying other aspects of novel and I must say am really impressed and I really enjoyed it.
Overall it’s a fine story. The main issues are that all the girls surrounding the main character cry whenever something happens. Its used way to much to be normal. It would also be nice if the author had an auxiliary chapter or something similar that explains the different cultivation stages and gives some world background. There are also a few grammer and spelling errors, but it isnt too bad.
TRADUCTOR GOOGLE (JAJAJ XD T_T): I think that of all the reviews of the new novels this is the best along with (Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich, but the bad thing about this is that it has a lot of comedy and a point where it gets boring), I hope a lot of this novel since at Look has a focus on the genre INFINITY, think about it! a person who travels between worlds and acquires new memories and techniques sounds very interesting. and I almost bet that in the image they put, the mc does not hold a sword but a magic wand or a staff, so I guess there is also magic * - * or he becomes a magician :O
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Haven't even began to read it yet but I can instantly see how horrible the grammar is in the synopsis.If you can't use English well then don't make a story with it.
Starts off very promising with a likeable MC and the mystery behind his birth. But then it's all about his encounters with beautiful ladies. And nothing about being a medical doctor.... so, yeah.
I enjoyed my timing reading the story.So far, it got me hooked and pining for more chapters.The story-telling is great! It has a lot of potential as well to be great. The weaving of emotions for each scene was impressive.Please give this story a chance! 5/5
The book is great so far and through the chapters we see glimpses of his past life which has helped us the readers gain some understanding so far.the writing quality of the book is pretty decent.the lack of design on the world outside of the game in especially with regards to what he is capable of especially in regards to his skills.
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I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story. First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities. Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players.Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter.In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.
Please bring this novel back into trial read. Seems like a good novel by The Plagiarist.( /^ω^)/♪♪Wheeeeee~(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬Hoooongggg lonnnggggg~〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜