To be honest you may feel like this is me being a bad person and just randomly rating, but this novel is really not that good
Its very generic and as general as it could be. if you have read Tales of demons and gods, sovereign of the three realms, dragon-war emperor, (that novel with xiao yun guy and his heavenly fire)or any cultivation novel than dont even bother reading it coz the only difference in this would be,
1. That mc has skillz from prevoius life.
2. Mc can beat opponents above his cultivation stage
there is atlesst one page of other people's opinion in a chapter
3. F͟emales around mc are hawt and flock towards him.
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I read the whole book some times I was happy sometimes I was sad in tears it was a roller coaster if u r new to reading Chinese stories I don't recommend it personally because ther is too much characters. One of the greatest stories there is plot twist and lot of romance I cried hor an hour some people will tell me I'm weak but who doesn't read the whole story and doesn't cry. I hoped the writer will have a sequel but he doesn't intended to write a sequel
Honestly, this was a big surprise for me. Here we have a story with a semi-lewd title, where I expected to see a bunch of quasi-sex scenes, where there is some innuendo but nothing that I would be ashamed reading around my mother.
The fun aspect of this is that we have a bunch of interesting events that just want to conspire to kill the guy where he is just barely hanging on by the use of his simulation system. He also is gaining several interesting abilities, most of which as the reader I do not find a lot of potential in, but the author uses them in very useful ways.
This is one of the few that I would hope to read more of.
it's your usual 1000000000000000000000x everything novel. those type of novels will always have plot holes but it seems like majority of the people reading don't care. I always wonder why these type of novels are always the one getting picked. it's nothing new and obviously not high quality. it's as if webnovel is just recycling trash and adding a new premise and calling it a new novel.
Untrustworthy translator. In chapter 660 he replaced text to make political commentary and political remarks on current modern politics, even though the MC's origins take place in our distant future.
Not only did this break the immersion the author tried to immerse us in, but the original RAW also did not include any of this. Whoever was responsible for adding this-- you, your editors or someone else. you allowed it to stay thus unnecessarily painting a bad light on this entire novel.
I read fantasy to get away from the real world not so I can be engaged in it.
Really interesting! Supporting my buddies excellent new work! It may be just for fun - because it is a really fun read! Now to overcome the barrier called 140 words minimum. Here's a story.
It was late at night. Zeref had just closed up when he heard heavy footsteps outside. *Stomp stomp stomp*; then they stopped - right outside the bar doors.
"Hello...?" He called out; but it was quiet; with just the pitter patter of rain outside.
(Wait, rain...?) His eyes widened in horror.
It wasn't raining.
It was...
Oh it's done. 140 characters reached.
i dont know what to say but i know this when i reading this chapters i cant understand what year is it or whats going on when i am reading the chapter. I thinking “oh maybe they will fight now” but when i go onether chapter no fight and chapter starting like this he is elewen now?..? i cant understand did you deleted some chapter ?
Having this novel awkardly enough recommended by Facebook, I sure do not regret clicking on it. An incredibly addictive story, with great depth put into all the details and the characters, surely kept me entertained on those long commutes to and back from work. I'll definitely will be awaiting further chapters with great anticipation ^_^
Come for Alevian, stay for Luna, snicker at how cute Alvy arc was, and damn, you know how to balance between calm daily slumber, just to throw in a total bomb (and almost always foreshadowed ever so slightly!) - hats off.
The story is interesting, I must admit that. I see that you're trying to portray the MC as a through and through villain who also has his humane side, which reflects in Li Na and characters such as grandma and Ling Chen.
But on the other hand, it seems as if he exists only to be tyrannical, to be evil and brutal, all the bad, unprincipled.
I'd say that your writing pace is too fast, slow down a bit, add a bit more description to certain scenes, even the fighting ones. Try to add more introspection on the MC's side so we can understand him better.
For example, the assassination scene in the manor where he cut the throat of the guy who slept with two women could have been written with more tension by describing his mental state and such.
Why aren't you already making him use his golden finger by entering small markets and taking non-perishables under everyone's noses? Describe a scene like that.
Despite being a character that's supposed to be both smart and villainous, he seems superficial. Some kind of male ego, a chauvinistic point of view is leading him forward. I'm see-sawing between neutrality and antipathy for him as a character.
For better reading experience, please proofread your chapters the best you can. Use capital letters, comas, all the proper punctuation.
In the end, despite all of this, I'm giving it a pretty high grade because it has potential and I did say it is interesting.
Good work and continue pushing forward.
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the best league of legends novel, it covers the entire world of lol, it has very good interactions with the team, a very clear purpose, the fights are good and a very well done structure, romance, I give it 9/10 because I still don't know term
Woah! Woah! Woah! Bishop's nemesis you're at it again! Another master piece?
A wonderful and interesting start, it's good and incredible.
Am awaiting your updates lol!