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Another much awaited novel by Emma
I'm just starting but as someone who also write, I like how this was written, thumbs up to the author! I wish this to be read and voted by many. I'll give my votes anyway!
Really enjoying this book. Could be cheaper though
great book! I've read many of your books now. I can tell this is the authors first book or definitely one of the first because there was a lot more errors than her others. but it was pretty easy to decipher and read through. the plot and characters captures your heart and keeps you wanting to read!
The premise of the storyline was good, but after the lead female character dies a very brutal death. As the author you write her a second chance at life, but you give us a weak wimpy character who’s afraid to get her hand dirty and has a hard time taking revenge against her killers. so disappointin.
Amazing story line .You should definitely check it out.
all of your stories are just so good, well written and captivating
and this one is really an amazing story
cute & adorable story to read
loving this for far, nice story and well written looking forward to reading more ?
"It's actually a rather compelling narrative. The main issue lies in occasional arbitrary plot elements that can disrupt the flow of the story."
I would rate the translation as 5 out of 5, particularly praising Lilies are Flowers and Nighthawk Works for their excellent work. The storytelling pace is also a solid 5/5, maintaining a gripping drama-like flow without any dull moments.
However, the character development receives a 3/5. Zhan Zhao and Bai Yutang maintain consistency, but their chemistry lacks depth. Gongsun Ce's character arc seems inconsistent, starting as a dark character but later transforming into a typical tsundere. Bai Jingtang might be intriguing for some, but his actions and the portrayal of brain damage as a plot device raise questions about the author's understanding of the subject.
In terms of scientific accuracy, the rating is 3/5. Although the author attempts to incorporate psychology, some aspects are portrayed inaccurately, like Zhao Jue's character and the portrayal of Dissociative Identity Disorder. The author appears to have done minimal research, which can be disappointing for readers expecting a well-researched police procedural.
Overall, the story is lightweight and entertaining, suitable for a casual read, but with noticeable inconsistencies and a superficial approach to its scientific elements. If the author aimed for a supernatural mystery rather than pretending to be a realistic police investigation, the story might have been more enjoyable without the reliance on misunderstood psychology.