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i dont usually do reviews but this is good , doesn't have that bad Chinese patronism the Grammer mistakes are few . but most of all it is genuinely funny , all the characters are alive , they have a personality , this is definitely worth reading , and at chapter 500 it hasn't gone towards cultivation , it's sticking to it's starting theme , it has a story , an idea and not just cliches piled on top of one another
The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.
I'm invested now, so, please update soon! ????????
soo good but i don't know why u stopped writing new ones. pls update new chapters...........
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Can't recommend this. Poor character design and development. Awful world building. Not the greatest grasp on English. About the only good thing about this is maybe the chapter amount. The r-18 scenes are pretty poor so it doesn't even have that really going for it. If you do decide to read keep in mind this author is terribly terribly inconsistent at least up to where I've read. And if it gets better I simply do not care as I gave it a solid shot already.
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The story is great and loved it. Although mc is arrogant but it is not to the point of being annoying. Also loved the fact there is cultivation outside too. Mc is an orphan but it is sometimes foreshadowed to have some mysterious background.
The only problem is thd author stopped and is focusing on the other novel.
So when will the author continue this novel?????
Good popcorn reading, feels too conversational.. not enough Polish.
Feels like the author is so invested in having fun that they're not.. writing, it has its place
Ahh... I like that you started with a family and the protagonist being extraordinary, better than the stereotype loses.
The writing was fair and easy to hook into...while the character tone looked a bit unnatural. might work on that.
There's not may error I can found throughout the first six chapters, the author has worked his muscle on that.
Overall it has potential, like most other vrrpg novels, though its seemed a bit different than those.
Good luck Author for the sprity...
Check out this novel! I really loved it!
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