Whiting quality is not that great but the story and how the world and gods were made was interesting
where is fucking chapter man?
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The premise of the story is good, worldbuilding is fantastic, it got me hooked up too, Lee long and Hannah Muller's interactions are funny with their constant bickering, keep up the good work author! you're doing a fantastic job.
I liked it up till ch 20 then slowly lost intrest but keep up the good work great concept plus may not be my cup of tea but may be someone elses
Grammar is good
I just hate the MC he is childish (understandable since he is one) and he is very naive. also he just hates humans and loves monsters, i get the author said that it will be explained later but it seems like it is something that is relevant to early events in the book and needs to be explained early on.
Honestly i have a hard time sitting through the book.
I'll say, this novel does contain some potential only if the author tries to bring it towards a better result. The author needs to focus more on learning about the genre, and then write more.
(Note: If the author is from Nepal, please join https://discord.gg/Xd7maf
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Qidian has brought their quality standards even lower then they already were, any lower and we’ll see invisible dragon on trial read. I wish novels like lord of the oaisis, the guy with sandbox powers, the other guy with god powers, and that one novel where the guy was a snake could come back.
Anyway you can start updating again?Its dope
Really hope this novel gets picked for trial read. I was able to find raw and read machine translate through google translate. and it is a really good novel in my opinion. sadly the only way to read more than 50 chapters of this novel to to get it picked for translation because the raw website charges after 50 chaps and since it is based in china there is no way for me to pay and get access to the rest of the chapters. So please help get this Great novel picked.