Im sorry for those who support lgbt but imma go with own principleI realy love everything in here except for some characters its kinda disgusting for me, i ussually avoid lgbt or yaoi tags but i accidentally read this, now its in my head i must wash my brainBut it was good though i mean the story, so much creativity, so much potential tsstssIts my fault anyway i didnt read the tags before reading i was baited in recommendation
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It's really good I'm just a picky person so I have a certain preference on what kind of detail and design also I have to have a easy to read but also detailed background I really recommend it other than my picky self it's a really good book
Uhm does the background and class he choose remind me of other similar novel goes by the name martial gamer or it is different?i havent read much of this story just a couple so sory if it a mistake on my part
This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good.The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking.I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing.I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)
I'm not a fan of martial art/spirits, but I am a fan now! I really like how you did with the story. Everything feels new to me, but you had a knack for describing things in the novel! Keep up the good work!
From the title and what it wrote in synopsis, I think I had read a very, very similar one before.. Reiki recovery:billions time talent.. In mtl if I'm not mistaken... If the guy start from hundred times talent to thousand to ten thousand, then it really the same.. But young man instead of old man in Reiki novel..
it has always been my dream to be an author, based on my past experience as a student, I can say I've got some potential only that i do have almost no environment to give a try on my area of interest..so mostly i do follow up on facebook trying to guide myself through into the world of authorship
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I dislike Mad snail all I have to say, if TDG brought you to the scene of chinese novel like it did to me, you’ll understand... Mad snail has a tendency to give up writing novels or rush it.