Man, where to get started! A great premise so far with a lot of humor and laughs on my part! The story is starting to shape up well, and finally we are at the part where the story started! So chapter 73 if you guys want to know! Also the author is starting to have a better updating stability, but there have been bumps in the road. Still a great story with a lovable mc and his chicken!
Wow, all reviews are 5 stars. Hard to believe it so I'll gonna add this story to my library for now then wait for the chapters to grow into hundreds then read. I really hate when I'm have been left hanging when I'm already so into the story just because there are only few chapters. :D
I like the stpry but there are two mood points. One is the wordpadding, the story gets streched till its breaking point. At some points of time I skipped multiple pages, because the author just kept repeating himself.The other mood point is the regressing translation quality. After chapter 60-80 the quality takes a noticable dive. Translations for specific things get changed multiple times per chapter, words that don't seem to belong into sentenced and many more. It feels like the typical MTL errors that were forgotten to correct. A shame because at least 80 percent of those errors could have been corrected by simply reading through chapter once more before releasing.
This has been a fun read so far. The flow of the story is thought out well, the explanations of skills and status aren't overly complicated and repeated every chapter.It's my hope this author continues on this path and creates something wonderful.
Amazing story, although first ten chapters or so are not really well doneBut I recommend you tolerate through it and you’ll witness a really interesting story
Its deviated from the original idea. What originally should have been about a fallen immortal running a wine store has instead morphed into a story where the wine store aspect has been sidelined in favour of ‘sect building’. Like what the **** author? I came here to read about what was written in the synopsis not some bullshit xianxia novel where the protagonist builds a sect with the system aspect only being there to give him quick powerups.An example being how the system missions were previously all about making wine and the betterment of the store deviating and becoming some random bullshit like “Explore the Fallen Immortals Cave where there are items useful for your cultivation!”Summary: Used to be a unique novel that stayed true to its synopse only to regress into a typical xianxia novel where the protagonist unwittingly collects a harem and the system is relegated into being an object that serves no other purpose other than to be the source for the protagonists miraculous powerups.
Obviously, in this world nothing can be perfect so I can't rate 5 stars so I rated 4.5 stars. If anyone who like the sacred runes, forty milleniums of cultivation , swallowed star those kind of of novels then this is for you! And if you like even more mysterious powers, a Low Key MC and beauties then you hit the jackpot! :D I hope you enjoy reading it! And please share some of your impression with me. ;p
Last update was August 2019. Then no news fron author. Don't waste your time if the author is going to drop this novel. And why translator didn't check the update stability before choose to translating this novel??
I love this novel.....❤️❤️❤️❤️. It's so interesting....???? Best way to spend time.....
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The writing quality is okay but some sentences do not use the proper grammar so if someone insists on reading a novel that has no errors whatsoever in writing, they wouldn’t read this. But overall, the story is great and it’s even an original novel! Not translated for once! The writing adds a little blemishes to the review but it’s still one of my favorite stories!
BAD VERY BAD. The Author might as well make his dead daughter the MC because she is the only one with the ideas it seems. Youd think after translating 200 chapters for PREMIUM use the translation would get better but instead it seems a little worse