Our MC transmigrated into the body of a villain and head of a demonic sect. The plot is decent and well paced, but nothing that grasps my attention.
please author don't drop, if you don't drop it would make my year. I will give gift. thank you very much. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop. pls no drop.
I loved it every single bit of it ?? it was a fun and adventurous FF
The author lacks IQ and the MC lacks EQ.A monk says his wife is a demon 3 times and tells the MC to separate from her. However, he still follows the monk on a demon hunting organization. He had to be a little careful, but he acts like he owns the place.Since my wife is a demon, I won't tell her that I work as a demon hunter. This only shows the immaturity of the MC, generating cliché situations in sequence. The story is completely disappointing.
Does it have sex scenes romance or smut and a harem or all of them combined
No one wants to read about ****ty urban doctors lusting over pretty girls anymore, Qidian. It's so cliche and boring... why can't you pick legitimately good novels?
One of the few trial novels I find interesting recently..................................................................... . ............
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i love how the author is very open minded regarding his work. taking all the criticism seriously. i really respect that aspect of him. strives to improve his novel just so that readers can enjoy his novel more. i love how he's so detailed in fight scene, but being detailed also has its drawbacks that readers might find it annoying if the fighting drags a bit too long. overall, enjoyed the novel hopefully author has more works like this in the future
Not bad, could use some more work. Fanfic is reincarnation, MC dies and meets god. Grammar is ok, writing style is a little annoying but readable. Updates are constantly. World building is meh, it’s there but not explained. Story is ok, would be better to see more original stuff.
It has some good elements to it with the VR zombies, but It's also clear that the author isn't a native English speaker. However, sometimes non-native speakers write the best books! Hope the author keeps improving, and keeps making the story more and more exciting! One thing I'd like to see is some action and build up immediately, but other than that it has a chance to hook you if you give it some time! Thanks, I hope you write at least an hour a day!
READ OR RUN??TRANSLATION QUALITY: Between glaring grammatical errors, names being interchanged and the structure of the novel as a whole, it creates a difficult read. The grammar is ****** which, in theory, should make for an easy and quick read, instead weakeneds the story. The simplistic style highlights all the grammatical mistakes either the author or the translators have made. To be utterly cynical, it makes no sense for there to be as many mistakes as there are due to this being written in a language that is comfortably within the compass of a 10-year-old. They either need to put in more effort, have a new team pick this up or , heck, at this point I will take a freaking editor. All the pLinKesses are making me cringe. I cry bitter hot tears every time I read certain sentences. STABILITY OF UPDATES: Personally, I do not have much of a preference on this. 10 chapters a week is neither a large amount nor a small amount. BUT, there are translators whom push out more chapters a week at a better quality then what we are reading here. If the translation was better I would be more forgiving, but due to simply mistakes I have to give them a poor rating. I am a fan of quality over quantity. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The author needs to learn how to show NOT tell. The entire plot must have been carefully outlined, which makes for an excellent foundation, but fell flat in terms execution. The only details you will get is the author waxing a poetic paragraph over certain beautiful characters' appearance. And the story so far plays out like a paint by numbers or an adventure quide: After reading to chapter 50, I found my attention slipping. I knew that A, B and C would happen and then we would see X result. Then, three chapters later, A, B and C would happen again and then X would, yet again (shocker, I know) be the result. Little to no variation. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: And then there is the narration. Because the writing is not enjoyable, the narration, in consequence, is not either. Plus, I feel extremely disconnected from the characters, especially the MC. I find myself not caring about the circumstances he finds himself in because there is no suspense. No chance of failure. Each step in Link's character progression is transparent and, worse yet, dull. But not all is a complete waste, the author appears to have written himself into a corner with the MC's ability, making him too OP early on. To counteract this, he creates a system of magic where just because the MC gains the ability to cast spells does not mean he understands the logic and process behind his magic, placing a decent damper on MC's ability. Unfortunately, this is short lived. The MC gains knowledge and understanding at an alarming rate. If you thought the game system, in which, he could purchase spells (Including Legendary, Hidden, ect.)was an OP ability, you are sorely mistaken. The MC's genius level intellect is in fact his largest cheat skill; gifting him the ability to process, plan and react to situations (some life and death), understand knowledge from the modern world he had difficulty understanding in his previous life and recall all information he so much had glanced at in his previous life (such as the forums). . . Relatable, right. Whatever. Part of what makes s successful fantasy is the reader being able to suspend disbelief. If the MC either possessed the genius level intellect OR the gaming system, not both. Both skills balance each other out and compliment each other TOO well. He has no weakness. No faults. Nothing terribly interesting. WORLD BACKGROUND: I find myself more interested in the world, the MC has been transported to the MC himself. Similar to the MC, the reader is drooped into the middle of the story, unlike the MC though we do not possess years of knowledge from gaming. Very little is explained unless the plot calls for it, then we are treated to an information dump on every single thing they hope will distract you long enough till MC's plot armour activates and Houdinis his way out of whatever situation of the week he has landed himself in. I still have little idea how powerful a level 1 is compared to a level 2 or even to a level 3 or 4. Levels are thrown out like yesterday's underwear and I am left with no proper explanation on how powerful someone really us, not just because they possessed a higher number. FINAL ANALYSIS: Run. I would walk across the desert while eating charcoal briquettes soaked in Tabasco for forty days and forty nights than have to read this novel again.