"How dare you talk to me, you dreadful boy?"
It's all good, maybe you needed time to phrase you words. It's kinda what I need now to. Also I too should've been more clear and I still don't know how to express it. I just know that it's not that I'm against harem novels. I just can't stand the lack of communication not just between the mc and the fl, but all the love interests. And not just a bunch of words strung along to put some interactions between the ladies. But actual relationships. Big sisters, little sisters, best friends, rivals, something, anything. And I don't ever recall reading a novel that does that. If you can create real interactions between the girls then YES! I would totally be okay with harem novels. I just hope I explained it good enough. Now I understand that you can't do it at this point because they are miles apart. But I'm not trying to change your story. It's your, I'm just along for the ride. I was just expressing my thoughts on harems.However now that you point it out what you wrote about Love, Luck, and Emperor makes a lot of sense. I just interpreted it a different way. You were most likely clear enough, I'm not very good at connecting dots.I'm sorry if I made you feel troubled by my words. I wasn't trying to change the way you wrote your story.
Suddenly she was engulfed in his embrace. He kissed her softly and Na'eemah smiled into the kiss his beard always tickled her chin. She bit on his bottom lip and deepened the kiss. For her, he would have all the time in the world.
"I'd like a room and something to eat, preferably meat.
You also need to understand that it will be straightforward for you to do this and wouldn't be painful as we have already tested this amount of power before at our clan."
Sincerely and Apologetically,
Camping ⛺️ Camping ⛺️ Camping ⛺️ Camping ⛺️
This story is truly captivating. Please keep up the great work. I'm grateful it's free to read, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. It's refreshing to see a fantasy novel with such rich character development.
The story is interesting. Easy to understand. Keep up the good work. ??
Nice book. I love the way you portray the events. Keep It up author. You are one of the best. ???
You know, for a book with a simple and sleezy premise it has a lot of good moments. Frankly it feels a lot like the author makes it up as they go along, but so Ling as they keep their facts straight (and they do for the most part) it's ok. The main character is a very flawed person, which is slightly refreshing from the standard goody two shoes.My biggest complaint is that the actual story doesn't start until about the halfway mark. The writing before that is important context but the main story doesn't start till midway in the book.Overall I'd say a worthwhile read. An author more talented than I was expecting