I'm Not A Master, I'm A Director (Creating Fate Movie In Fate-verse)

I think this is a good story, it just isn't hitting a spot for me personally. I think from what I have read so far the story is an enjoyable read and is going to build up to some really good things but at the moment this story isn't really hooking me in enough to read everyday. I think that the writing quality is good the characters are good and premise is good I just think that you should wait until chapter 50-80 to come to a definitive conclusion if you like the book or not. reading the Author's other's work I have a strong feeling this story is going to be really good.

Not bad, could use some more work. Fanfic is reincarnation, MC dies and meets god. Grammar is ok, writing style is a little annoying but readable. Updates are constantly. World building is meh, it’s there but not explained. Story is ok, would be better to see more original stuff.

Hello everyone Ellendria here. This is my second novel that I'm working on. I'm planning to jump around between my two stories to keep my creative juices flowing. I feel this first chapter of mine for this novel went pretty great. As always for my returners I write on my phone so sorry if things appear off. Anyway thanks for stopping by! ????

This is great also this is the first time I've seen a gigantic story and I think it would be good as well I pick 3 a combination of 1 and 2 hot steamy s#x  and a date im  glad about no harem there are to many of those good job I also read them all also if you do 18+ scenes don't do them like 1 chapter actual then pure s#x to many authors do that and it gets annoying great job keep up the great work now time to reread

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