I couldn't understand it at all. Sucky descriptions of characters, bad grammar, bad character development, and wtf do you mean get can talk while being only three years old and everyone acting like he could talk before that.
'Boy love' is all I need to know about your story. To me, BL(sh*t) = disgusting garbage, potential suicide material. You are not right in the head writing and reading this.
As repayment for reading your first book IBAZVW all on pirating sites I will leave a 5 star review.
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up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis.
the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W
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This is literally a copy/pasted version of game of thrones... Why are so many idiots trying to post stolen works on this site? Seriously, its a published and has a copy-right.
Lol cultivation and system haha combination of stories sounds amazing i gonna read this first then review again hahahahahha 1283892919 140 characters more characters can't post characters chatacters
Love the story but the Author should go back and edit the story. With the amount of times the characters names are mixed up and the genders are wrong most of the time.
This novel is insanely satisfying the characters , the world design , the story , the vibes everything is made for quality I really liked it .
Livro excelente. Leitura empolgante. Recomendo.
I don't know for sure if this book will stay with me ike some of the others do, hopefully quality and frequency doesn't drop. Good enough for now.
good, and I want more, need more, give me more.... please